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    I am here mostly for audio, but I have no new audios at the moment, so I said fuck it, lemme see what you guys thing of this..

    This is a dream I had, and I used it in a peotry tournament which I won a while ago.. lemme know what you think, but be warned, its kinda long.

    Freedom

    The double doors were opened, and I stood there, with fear in my eyes,
    With my hands and feet shackled like an animal, I found my way inside,
    I made my way to my seat, and glanced around the room before I sat down,
    I took a deep breath and tried to relax, but how? I was a criminal now,
    The judge made his appearance and the pre-trial proceeding began,
    The cameraman readied the camera forthe trial of a Middle Eastern man...

    There was an awkward silence just before the opening statements,
    Piercing through the silence though, was the feeling of pure hatred...

    There I sat, quietly, with no emotion on my face as I was being dissected,
    Innocent before guilty? To the jury, my race was the only thing that reflected,
    I listened as the opposing attorney label me as a monster with no remorse,
    He just went on and on, he was relentless, as if I was asking for more,
    It even got to the point where I began feeling like the things he called me,
    I could do nothing but bow my head, thinking that never again, will I be free,
    I almost wanted to cry, and it seemed that way as I had my face in my hands,
    I slowly look up, and to my surprise, I was getting asked to take the stand…

    I take the stand, and as a man, I could do nothing but tell the truth right?
    I blinked, and began to recall all that I remembered of that horrible night…

    I could not sleep, so I decided to take a walk, to gather my thoughts,
    I didn’t get far, and that’s when I heard a loud explosion, and I was lost,
    It seemed as if the whole world was at the mercy of the explosive force,
    I was curious, so I headed to where crowd was, not getting to close of course,
    The next thing I knew, finger were getting pointed, and I was getting blamed,
    I thought, how could they judge me this quick, before they even knew my name?
    I knew this wasn’t good, so I started to run, I just wanted to get away,
    No matter how fast I ran, I still heard the voices of racists, taunting me,
    I just couldn’t take it anymore; these voices wouldn’t stop haunting me,
    I could run no more, the pressure was unbearable I dropped to my knees,
    I tried to block everything out, and it worked, all I could feel were my huffs,
    The next thing I knew, I looked up, and I was in a cop car in handcuffs…


    After I gave my testimony, I slowly rose from the chair, and looked around,
    I looked into the faces of all the jury, hoping to make peace for now,
    I walked back to my seat, and listened in to the closing arguments pend,
    I sat there, motionless and emotionless as the trail came closer to its end,
    I couldn’t help but fear the fact that I had no control over my fate,
    I could do nothing but wait, as the jury started to deliberate…

    Damn, here I am, on trail for merely being a Palestinian man,
    I guess all I can say is that my life is now in god's hands...

    Only a few hours later, out comes the jury, ready to speak,
    I was nervous, awaiting the outcome; I rose and stood on my feat,
    “Has the jury come to a verdict?” asks the judge wasting no time,
    “Yes, your honor, we have,” the main juror spoke on the outcome of the crime,
    “What say you?” asks the judge, as he blinked and glanced over at me,
    I stood there, anxiously awaiting the outcome, either prison or being set free,
    Then the main juror spoke… “We the jury, find the defendant, not guilty.”

    The first thing to come to my mind was to thank god for the verdict,
    I dropped to my knees, and silently prayed, but I know he heard it…

  • #2
    this was amazing. excellent work.

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    • #3
      damn man. How long we been knowin each other? 2? 3 years? Had no idea you had that in you, god damn.

      that was incredibly heartfelt man. Trust me.

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      • #4
        That was awesome and it flowed perfectly.

        Great work.
        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
        Let the night be too dark for me to see
        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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        • #5
          thas wikid mayn
          Gimme a good rep point and leave ya name,and i'll leave you 1.

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          • #6
            uppin

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