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    A quick rap i wrote, I need some feeback.

    Debut of a motherfucker with a fucking attitude,
    You better know and know to give me enough gratitude,
    When I drop the bomb on you, right here in front of you,
    A weapon of mass destrution, a weapon that will destory you,
    Like the German shit Hitler did to all those people,
    I hate my country, England sucks ass, so much ass,
    That we have enough fishiest to cause an atomic mass,
    I was sitting on down, down on my chair, chair in class,
    Being told about World War I and II, a pain in the ass,
    I wanted to get up, and throw the teacher words into glass,
    Cut the words, so it would start bleeding out the truth,
    Most of the men were forced to go at the start of their youth,
    And afterwards forced not to uncover, cover it up with lies,
    So knowbody would ever discover, discover the lies,
    That all the people who died, all the children who cried,
    The Dads who would never see there children's eyes,
    Cause they were forced to fight, and then forced to die,
    While the man forcing them to go, was here trying to hide,
    Saying goodbye to the men who would not know the hell that was ahead,
    That 1000 of troops would have to lay out there death beds, to die.

    feeback please
    Julian: Listen, Ricky, you're only at school for one reason, and that's to sell drugs.

  • #2
    it was good kid. and sadly true.

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    • #3
      thanks for the feeback

      I was trying to put a message into it, hopefully I pulled it off right to get the message across
      Julian: Listen, Ricky, you're only at school for one reason, and that's to sell drugs.

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