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    okay first of all... this might not be poetry i'm not sure... I tried to make it ryme in some places if you look closly you might not be able to understand it but either way give me feedback good or bad ( ignore punctuation and structure still working on it )

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    Let me get there before they do,
    let me see what it's like to live life
    in the spotlight,
    people chanting my name.
    I don't like this, the standing at the bottom
    where nobody can see me -
    I want to sit at the top,

    alongside the much beloved,
    proclaimed icons of the world.

    I feel I have a lot to offer

    I can prove I'm not
    another conceited
    ego-driven
    teenage human being -
    at least not by your definition

    there's talent
    under this small and slender exterior,
    I assume
    you presume

    I'm one seity arrogant individual
    and have pity on me
    thinking my level of intellect
    doesn't pair with my age

    what im saying
    might appear immature
    if I don't start admitting my faults,
    and get off my high horse

    prediction for the long run
    is I'm in for a rude-awaking,
    what you don't know is
    if given opportunity in the past
    right now you would be witnessing the work,
    mind set, beliefs of a legend

    now before you come to a false conclusion
    that I'm egotistical, and don't wish
    to read any longer
    please let me explain myself:

    I'm a hard worker
    when it comes to becoming something
    better than this, I don't take no for an answer,
    this ego keeps me sane you see -
    it keeps me on my feet
    keeps me aiming for something
    doesn't let me live in this world
    where I'm last in line to climb
    the ladder of success
    everyone is born with a gift
    if recognized, you can live
    just like those who you admire.

  • #2
    intresting, sounds like somebody i know.

    hmmmmmm.

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    • #3
      :/

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      • #4
        :/
        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
        Let the night be too dark for me to see
        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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