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    its amazing how you can strip a man's pride
    and inside they are deprived from being alive
    and being alivee on the outside is a lie
    and whats inside lyes and hides and rides
    at your emotions until you cant survive
    and you snap at the exact moment
    aand mr. happy has actually out grown that
    no one to trust, your friend or enemy
    my feelings will live on extending empty
    be fine one minute, than act cold
    feels like my heart tis being pulled into a black hole
    and its never escaping, my mind will never straighten
    so here i sit scraping in my chest, removing the heart remains
    and its a pain always getting hurt
    nice guys come secound, anyone else first
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

  • #2
    damn
    that reminded me off a friend...
    nice work, definitely
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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    • #3
      that was incrediably sincere and honest.

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      • #4
        thanx everyone, anymore feedback will be appreciated
        Originally posted by Realize
        evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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        • #5
          damn dawg shit was nice....

          BreathEZ


          [W-88][L-3][KO's-80]


          Originally posted by RikoChet
          LoL.. Yea I Thought Ori was the ghostwriter for everyone that ever had a good bar on this site...

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          • #6
            nice wording...good job

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            • #7
              aww sweet poem. I liked it. it was really honest. I liked the way you worded it
              "You wanna be the one in control
              You wanna be the one who's alive
              You wanna be the one who gets old
              It's not a matter of luck - it's just a matter of time

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