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    a childs hand that touches a flame
    will get burnt and ache with pain
    though they feel and know of this

    Given a second chance
    they 'll do just the same

    and when we get older
    that habit never really fades

    I was burnt
    I felt the aches

    didnt matter it was my heart
    it hurt just the same

    maybe even more
    it happened just once before

    thats all it took for me to say
    Never again
    I wont let myself love no more
    took me a year to recover

    heart's still sometimes sore
    Never again will I put my trust in Love
    i swore
    and for some time I didnt
    even though I tried
    i couldnt break the habit

    I struggled with all my might
    the force was too strong

    why try and fight
    so I gave in

    Im not sure if I did whats right
    I know the pain I may suffer

    but I just cant resist
    just like a child when he burns his little fist

  • #2
    questionable poem
    quite confusin to know what the point is
    however i loved this line

    Never again
    I wont let myself love no more
    took me a year to recover

    great free poem
    keep writin
    Back for the first time, the joke's on you.....

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    • #3
      Thank you. I know it needs some work.
      But thank you.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by yummie
        a childs hand that touches a flame
        will burn and ache with pain
        though they feel and know this
        Given a second chance
        they 'll do the same and when we get older
        that habit never seems to fade

        I got burnt
        I felt the aches
        didnt matter it was my heart
        it hurt just the same
        maybe even more
        it happened just once before
        thats all it took for me to say
        Never again
        I wont let myself love no more
        took me a year to recover
        heart's still sometimes sore
        Never again will I put my trust in Love
        this I swore
        and for some time I didnt
        didn last long
        even how hard I tried
        i couldnt break the habit
        I struggled with all my might
        the force is too strong
        why bother to try and fight
        so I gave in
        Im not sure if
        that was right
        I know theres pain I may suffer
        I just entered yet another fraught fight
        but I just cant resist
        just like a child
        when he once again burns his lil fist

        damn this piece I hear it and see it a certain way but it still comes out wrong
        oh yeah i was yummie one day
        Last edited by *Roxanne; 11-11-2004, 07:07 AM.

        *The FreeStyLe Church*

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        • #5
          not bad..
          Bang-bang when i chitty-chitty

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          • #6
            ^^thank you

            *The FreeStyLe Church*

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