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  • *Roxanne
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    ^^thank you

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  • Dri-rapsta
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    not bad..

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  • *Roxanne
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    Originally posted by yummie
    a childs hand that touches a flame
    will burn and ache with pain
    though they feel and know this
    Given a second chance
    they 'll do the same and when we get older
    that habit never seems to fade

    I got burnt
    I felt the aches
    didnt matter it was my heart
    it hurt just the same
    maybe even more
    it happened just once before
    thats all it took for me to say
    Never again
    I wont let myself love no more
    took me a year to recover
    heart's still sometimes sore
    Never again will I put my trust in Love
    this I swore
    and for some time I didnt
    didn last long
    even how hard I tried
    i couldnt break the habit
    I struggled with all my might
    the force is too strong
    why bother to try and fight
    so I gave in
    Im not sure if
    that was right
    I know theres pain I may suffer
    I just entered yet another fraught fight
    but I just cant resist
    just like a child
    when he once again burns his lil fist

    damn this piece I hear it and see it a certain way but it still comes out wrong
    oh yeah i was yummie one day
    Last edited by *Roxanne; 11-11-2004, 07:07 AM.

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  • yummie
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    Thank you. I know it needs some work.
    But thank you.

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  • Gloaxnatcher
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    questionable poem
    quite confusin to know what the point is
    however i loved this line

    Never again
    I wont let myself love no more
    took me a year to recover

    great free poem
    keep writin

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  • yummie
    started a topic dont touch

    dont touch

    a childs hand that touches a flame
    will get burnt and ache with pain
    though they feel and know of this

    Given a second chance
    they 'll do just the same

    and when we get older
    that habit never really fades

    I was burnt
    I felt the aches

    didnt matter it was my heart
    it hurt just the same

    maybe even more
    it happened just once before

    thats all it took for me to say
    Never again
    I wont let myself love no more
    took me a year to recover

    heart's still sometimes sore
    Never again will I put my trust in Love
    i swore
    and for some time I didnt
    even though I tried
    i couldnt break the habit

    I struggled with all my might
    the force was too strong

    why try and fight
    so I gave in

    Im not sure if I did whats right
    I know the pain I may suffer

    but I just cant resist
    just like a child when he burns his little fist

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