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    I wonder if i died, would it really matter?
    I've tried to get out but God hasent tossed me the ladder..
    So how can i continue while walking on seven years of glass being shattered..
    Reality is Dieing Trying, Dreams are Pockets getting fatter..
    HOpE, has undone me, im done on beliving that..
    Friends...FucKk them, i've tookin enuff stabs on my back..
    People sayy im negitive because the "positive" is what i Lack..
    So tell me how can you be Positive when your heart is being "Attacked"
    PUSHH MEE PUSSIEESS!... I NEEDD A GOODD REASOON TTO GIVEE THISS TRIGUREE A GOODD SQUEEZEE" (nodontsmi

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    DAMN.....that's DEEP!......."Friends...Fuck them, I've tookin enuff stabs on my back..." that hit's home! .....and I felt the last line......but you know what?...keep writing out what you feel man, it's the best way to let everything out........you have a lot of hurt and anger to let out.....I'm not a "shrink" or anything .....just speaking out of experience........you have some talent.......I like this one in particular 'cuz I can totally relate to it........like I said, just keep writing........you'll be alright (assuming if it's something you're going through)......good job...
    YoU Can'T HurT wHat'S No lONger ThERe.... wITh nO heArT...I dOn't FUCKEN CARE

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      i really like getting people's opinion..rather Good or bad..it just makes me wanna write more ..Thank you.
      PUSHH MEE PUSSIEESS!... I NEEDD A GOODD REASOON TTO GIVEE THISS TRIGUREE A GOODD SQUEEZEE" (nodontsmi

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        i really like this poem, it describes some of the feelings i've been havin

        ~RIP Proof~
        They say the good die young...


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