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    Heart Carved in Medication

    Itís been near 2 weeks now since I broke up with you
    Itís gotten hard, feel alienated, and donít know what to do
    Been put on medication, to control this sadness that I feel
    Depressed & isolated; how I wish these feelings were not real
    The pills shut off a part of my mind, so I donít think of you
    Push the thoughts away, making me believe they were not true
    I forget sometimes to take them & the pain I feel once more
    My heart itís torn, itís broken, and here it is lying helpless on the floor
    No longer it wants to feel; no longer does it want to love
    Never again it tells me, ďLove you should never again think offĒ
    So I ask those who I meet, if they would like to take my heart away
    They refuse and look at me, telling me that Iíll need it one day
    Though they just donít know what I recently went through
    They donít know the hurt and torture I received from you
    You worked at carving my heart slowly Ė it took 3 long years
    & here was the final month; you broke it as I broke into tears
    Once you had carved it perfect, with a few chips here & there
    I always thought that you were genuine; that you really did care
    But the shape of it didnít suit you; so you cut it up in two
    One part for a memory of you, and one part to savour the pain
    & here I am, diagnosed with this depression, living soaked in the rain
    My mind is now my best friend, my heart is my enemy
    I donít wanna love anyone else, not if this is how it turns out to be
    All I can do is hope, that these pills will last & will always heal my pain
    Because I donít wanna think of you Ė & I never wanna know you again
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

  • #2
    Really great poem and anyone with a broken heart has felt like that. The only thing I would change is the last line - somehow it fell flat (but believe me I am no expert).

    Anyway, Congratz on being Mod

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