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  • My Angel (Unfinished)

    Just something I just typed up now... I haven't posted here in a little bit, because I haven't really had time to write or anything to actually want to write about. I don't really like this, it has corny, cliche and cheesy written all over it, but I figured I'd try and write something... expect something less personal and cheesy next time... lol.

    Intro
    I'd fade away as I would pray for peace, but my pain would last,
    And I'd look up to the skies and wish with each day that passed,
    For a dream or a miracle to come true just once within this life,
    Staring up at the stars as they appear and make a wish at night,
    Even though I felt twas a childish act, it was the little hope I had,
    To rely on the idea of fate n love, otherwise I wouldn't ever last,
    I always wanted someone by my side, so over time it was a need,
    Till that summer day I felt she'd truly did come to be here with me...


    Verse 1
    I used to spend my days alone, growing cold, and losing my grasp on hope,
    Thinking that I couldn't go on and cope without having someone to hold,
    Drowning in my sorrow and wishing for miracle to show up in tomorrow,
    Thinking love is nothing less then forever and anything less is just borrowed,
    And more lust then anything else, cause passion is hotter then hell itself,
    But, I'd known with her, it was real the second that her touch had been felt,
    Living in a dream of an impossible miracle that was somehow actually real,
    And somehow I'd come to feel what emotions I felt I was never meant to feel,
    Realizing that there's no gift greater then holding the one you love so closely,
    And in that moment you'd make a promise to stay together without knowing,
    I'm proud to say I've fallen in love and even prouder to say that I'm still falling,
    And it's going beyond just love, and I'm not even sure what you could call it,
    I've just been spending my time with her running throughout my entire mind,
    Writing line after line of rhymes attempting to somehow make it become defined,
    But, I see, that some things are better left unknown and better off just unsaid,
    All I need to do, is realize and be thankful of the day we both finally had met,
    Because ever since then, I've come to feel like I'm the man I'd wish to become,
    But never felt I was capable of being, and that's just one great thing about love....


    Chorus
    Even if the darkness overshadows and your halo's glow dims,
    And the hands of the world grab at you, till you've got no wings,
    You're still my angel... Baby, you're still my angel...


    Verse 2
    I always thought "Love is blind" meant you never see it coming, which is true,
    Then I thought, it meant that you're blind to all their faults, which is true to,
    Then I thought that it meant it made you blind to ALL the emotions in it,
    Which is all true in a sence, I just hope my words reveal all that is hidden,
    And I can show you beyond what I feel and what I will soon feel over time.
    To the point we're old and married and able to say we have shared our lives,
    Because I know now, that if I lost you, the scales of my life would be tipped,
    And I can't imagine life without you and our love, I couldn't last without it,
    Because anytime I gaze upon you with these eyes, even at times you'd cry,
    I'd look at you and I'd see the most beautiful girl I'ven ever seen in my life,
    One moment in life I'll never forget is the night I came back to ask you out,
    I left and then I ran back, determined to let the question escape my mouth,
    And the moment before I did, I knew I was about to let myself begin to live,
    As I'd given you my heart, and in your palms I knew it was forever safe in,
    Even the time apart was hard, but I'm thankful for it now, cause it was hell,
    And now that I've been there, I truly recognize heaven, so it's not hard to tell,
    That it's there with you, when you're in my arms, and our lips beg to touch,
    Now, I know, if we have purpose, it was to live to find our way to this love....


    Chorus
    Even if the darkness overshadows and your halo's glow dims,
    And the hands of the world grab at you, till you've got no wings,
    You're still my angel... Baby, you're still my angel...
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

  • #2
    DAMN!.....I didn't think it was cheesy or cliche at all!.......it's beautiful.......and I like the chorus:"Even in the darkness overshadows and your halo's glow dims, and the hands of the world grab at you, till you've got no wings, You're still my angel...Baby, you're still my angel....", that's soooo sweet! very well written! I give it:
    YoU Can'T HurT wHat'S No lONger ThERe.... wITh nO heArT...I dOn't FUCKEN CARE

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    • #3
      Thanks alot.
      Now let the night be dark for all of me.
      Let the night be too dark for me to see
      Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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      • #4
        WOW!!! Astounding. You should be getting paid for this if you aren't already. You are an incredible writer. The poems you post..I can only assume that they are actually songs, and if they aren't yet, they need to be. There hasn't been a really good love song in awhile (okay,well, a couple), and yours would be a smash, I think. Keep 'em comin man, you've got real talent.
        Life is what you make it.

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        • #5
          ooohhhh my macarooni

          ......2:032 i'm gonna write ur name on my t-shirt right about now 2:032.....

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          • #6
            amazing amazing amazing
            see you have to keep posting here
            it needs your creativity, like i keep telling you
            i love you poetry Mike
            Keep it comin' :D
            ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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