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    I feel the fear coming with red eyes and claws.
    I hear it scratching on the door so I pause.
    this is agents all fouls, rules, and laws.
    I have been fearing this moment for to long.
    I hear it whispering in my ear.
    I can't make out the words then it all comes clear.
    I try to run I try to hide but it is to close to near.
    why must I face this horrible fear.
    I look around before I become blind by tears.
    why must I have lied for all these years.
    I hear it step I feel it breath.
    I get so scared I break down to my knees.
    I hear the rain I hear the wind blow threw the trees.
    then I woke up and I find out I am now free.

    this poem is based on the nightmares I have been having.
    aim:TillDeath1028
    yahoo: freakonaleash6981
    lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

  • #2
    c'mon someone say something about it....good or bad
    aim:TillDeath1028
    yahoo: freakonaleash6981
    lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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    • #3
      Well, it's a really good/expressive poem. It's almost like you regret something you've done in your past, and there still hasn't been retribution or punishment for this thing you've done. And now, your demons have caught up with you, and they are seeking a way to make you pay for this old "crime". And, it's like you realize that these "demons" are trying to make you pay for whatever it is you've done, but you are still scared to admit/face up to whatever this past thing is. It's almost like your nightmares are actually a warning to deal with your problems before they deal with you, because the latter is far more worse. On a side note, your poem was rather fun to try to interpret, even if I did do a piss poor job. LOL Wonderful piece, and two thumbs up.
      Life is what you make it.

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      • #4
        NICCEE!..this wass a great poem
        PUSHH MEE PUSSIEESS!... I NEEDD A GOODD REASOON TTO GIVEE THISS TRIGUREE A GOODD SQUEEZEE" (nodontsmi

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        • #5
          thanks guys
          aim:TillDeath1028
          yahoo: freakonaleash6981
          lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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