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  • A Cheated Heart

    After all the years together
    After all we've been through
    I don't want to hear the excuses
    Because I have always been good to you

    I stood by your side
    When no one else would
    I have always comforted you
    When no one else could

    But where are you tonight
    While I'm sitting at home
    Who shares your time
    While I sit alone

    But I won't be miserable
    I know I'm not to blame
    I have always been a lady
    And I won't walk away ashamed

    I won't even ask
    I don't want a reason why
    I don't want to know her name
    So for the last time
    Goodbye and goodbye
    Life is what you make it.

  • #2
    oh yeah
    i like this one a lot
    it just so reminds me of someone
    great work
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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    • #3
      YuLPP this a good poem..
      youu seem very good at what you do
      Keep up the GoOd work..
      PUSHH MEE PUSSIEESS!... I NEEDD A GOODD REASOON TTO GIVEE THISS TRIGUREE A GOODD SQUEEZEE" (nodontsmi

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      • #4
        i love it.............ith reminds me of memories...............u did a great job
        From yours truly, ANGEL! (U)

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        • #5
          Thank you all. Sneaky....I thought you and Tinytoones in particular might like this one, so I posted it. I'm glad everyone who's responded has enjoyed this poem, and thanks again.
          Life is what you make it.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by LoneLioness

            I won't even ask
            I don't want a reason why
            I don't want to know her name
            So for the last time
            Goodbye and goodbye
            i luved this, esspecialy "her name" bit, really great poem
            ...Gurl on da Mike



            3;-)3

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            • #7
              Originally posted by LoneLioness
              Thank you all. Sneaky....I thought you and Tinytoones in particular might like this one, so I posted it. I'm glad everyone who's responded has enjoyed this poem, and thanks again.
              you should know by now
              i'm a fan

              but seriously
              this poem, really let me relate to it
              you have no idea how many thoughts went through my head when i first read it
              excellent
              ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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              • #8
                nice

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                • #9
                  that was great.....I'm sorry about it tho
                  aim:TillDeath1028
                  yahoo: freakonaleash6981
                  lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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                  • #10
                    Hey girl!........thank's I do appreciate it, and yeah, I do feel ya on this one! beautiful work!.....U are a natural...your word's have a lot of power.....keep up the great work! !!!
                    YoU Can'T HurT wHat'S No lONger ThERe.... wITh nO heArT...I dOn't FUCKEN CARE

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by LoneLioness

                      I have always been a lady
                      And I won't walk away ashamed

                      oh yeahe babe, feelin that,

                      but thankfully i'm not relating to it on the scale it seems that u'r writting it from.

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                      • #12
                        even though this isnt something i can relate to, i liked it. very structured and well written poem.
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