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    Its OnlY BesT

    its only best if i could have you to myself..
    But why do i have the sence there is someone else..
    I can tell your think about her all the time..
    But do you ever have the thought of ME in your mind..

    Im being to think your loosing intrest..
    so maybe its only best if i just left..
    But you me the world to me, you say im "obessed"...

    The feelings for you are un-controlling..
    Your dragging into these rollercoaster when your done w/ me i just come back rolling..
    so its only best if my heart will keep going..


    its only best (U)
    PUSHH MEE PUSSIEESS!... I NEEDD A GOODD REASOON TTO GIVEE THISS TRIGUREE A GOODD SQUEEZEE" (nodontsmi

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    i have a couple mistakes but nothing that you guys wont understand...its short but its igght i guess
    PUSHH MEE PUSSIEESS!... I NEEDD A GOODD REASOON TTO GIVEE THISS TRIGUREE A GOODD SQUEEZEE" (nodontsmi

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    • #3
      "iigght" doesn't even start.....it's just a little better than that if you don't mind me sayin. It's short, to the point, but doesn't "feel" empty like many short poems do. It touches on quite a few subjects in just a few stanzas. Good Job.
      Life is what you make it.

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      • #4
        this is a poem that i made up during mathh..
        so i didnt put all effort in this "fresstyle poem" lol
        PUSHH MEE PUSSIEESS!... I NEEDD A GOODD REASOON TTO GIVEE THISS TRIGUREE A GOODD SQUEEZEE" (nodontsmi

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        • #5
          LOL well, i didn't see your poem touching too much on any math subjects...but, I dont think math would've improved it. I really like it though. Thumbs up.
          Life is what you make it.

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          • #6
            lmao.. no math lines in here ..Thanxss!
            PUSHH MEE PUSSIEESS!... I NEEDD A GOODD REASOON TTO GIVEE THISS TRIGUREE A GOODD SQUEEZEE" (nodontsmi

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