Is Only Best....

[YoUDonTKnoWMeE]

Its OnlY BesT

its only best if i could have you to myself..
But why do i have the sence there is someone else..
I can tell your think about her all the time..
But do you ever have the thought of ME in your mind..

Im being to think your loosing intrest..
so maybe its only best if i just left..
But you me the world to me, you say im "obessed"...

The feelings for you are un-controlling..
Your dragging into these rollercoaster when your done w/ me i just come back rolling..
so its only best if my heart will keep going..

its only best (U)

[YoUDonTKnoWMeE]

i have a couple mistakes but nothing that you guys wont understand...its short but its igght i guess

[LoneLioness]

"iigght" doesn't even start.....it's just a little better than that if you don't mind me sayin. It's short, to the point, but doesn't "feel" empty like many short poems do. It touches on quite a few subjects in just a few stanzas. Good Job.

[YoUDonTKnoWMeE]

this is a poem that i made up during mathh..
so i didnt put all effort in this "fresstyle poem" lol

[LoneLioness]

LOL well, i didn't see your poem touching too much on any math subjects...but, I dont think math would've improved it. I really like it though. Thumbs up.

[YoUDonTKnoWMeE]

lmao.. no math lines in here ..Thanxss!