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  • M-5
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    deep shit ghost

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  • elemental
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    yep it's gr8 to read ur stuff champ

    Definately a moment for reflection & gratitude, nice one!

    wow, what an amazing story expressed exceptionally!

    congrates & luck (doubt u need it tho).

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  • LoneLioness
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    I'm sure that many people will like it....your poem, aside from being really great, is
    also inspirational. It did help out, and thank you for your kind wishes. Best wishes ~LoneLioness

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  • G h O s T
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    Thank you so much for reading Loneliness...It feels good knowing somebody likes it
    Im also happy that it could help you out, good luck with your husband, I hope all goes well

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  • LoneLioness
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    That was beautiful GHOST. It's not really all that confusing. There are a couple of parts that it almost seems like she had died, but that changes towards the end of the second paragraph/stanza. I am fortunate enough to be married to the person I am in love with. He used to feel that I was his soulmate (so he said), but recently I've lost his "loving feeling" to an addiction. He's not the same, and I almost forgot what it was like to have someone that feels that way for you, until I read your poem. It reminded me of those times......those days that are reduced to mere memories, with little hope of ever be resurrected or relived. So, thank you. Great job.

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  • G h O s T
    started a topic ..A True Love..

    ..A True Love..

    Hey whats up everybody? Its been a while since Ive written here...
    So I hope you enjoy...

    Once upon a time, there was nothing but smiles
    Heart racing at the sight, like I was running for miles
    With a perfect personality, and not a physical flaw
    She had the potential to leave men swimming in awe
    With eyes having you feel, like your looking at stars
    A single glance will have her hooking up your heart
    With a caring side, shell have you feel like one of a kind
    And at one point I had the chance to claim her as mine
    As we shared time together, we started to grow
    But to make sure no one got hurt, we started it slow
    Took time before getting involved, so we stayed friends
    Seems like a happy ending, but heres where the story begins
    As the friendship got stronger, I worked up the courage
    But she wasnt ready for a man, so she never heard it
    Pretended like nothing happened, we stayed the same
    As weeks quickly turned to months things stayed the same
    I couldnt take it anymore, so I found another girl
    But I couldnt help but think she was my entire world
    She said Id broken her heart and she couldnt forgive
    Why did I have to mess up so bad? I didnt want to live
    Tried being friends, but everything turned to fights
    I couldnt sleep in bed, I just tossed and turned at night
    All connections disappeared, we remained out of sight
    Two years went by, never a glimpse or word
    But through all the time it seemed like it still hurt
    One night an angel watched, as we talked again
    As I told her that through it all my heart still didnt mend
    "I havent seen you in years, but feelings are just as strong
    And it hurts so much just for me to think that that your gone"
    She responded saying that she thought about me too
    "When I go with other guys I only think about you"
    Conversation continued for hours, just going back and forth
    And at the end it seemed like we were back on course

    We never shared a kiss, but it doesnt change the love
    Because just conversation with her was fullfillment enough
    Dont turn your back on love, because you might not get a chance
    To get the oppurtunity to reset and work on your romance
    I was lucky enough to be able to have another shot
    To get back the one I love...and itll never stop
    They say you dont appreciate till youve lost, it took two years
    To realize that Id lost the women, it brought me to tears
    I cherish every second, every word that she says
    Because I know that it might be the last I hear again

    ..Might be a little confusing..
    ..Ill be glad to explain if you dont understand anything..

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