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    seeing that one last moment playing over and over again.
    but the moment ends as soon as it began.
    I'll visit one more time if I can.
    I let the thorns of a rose cut my hand as it falls to your grave.
    that's just one more memory I'll have to save.
    every night I'll pray.
    I will always love you no matter what I say.
    only if we could be together for just one more day.
    only if there was more memories that I had with you.
    you must not run I must be brave.
    that's what you always said to me when I was scared.
    if only on more memory we could of shared.
    aim:TillDeath1028
    yahoo: freakonaleash6981
    lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

  • #2
    good..the first lines are str88 forward
    thats cool, and everyline seems detailed
    as soon as i read, i picture the images that your
    wrighting...GOOd wOrkk dawgg
    PUSHH MEE PUSSIEESS!... I NEEDD A GOODD REASOON TTO GIVEE THISS TRIGUREE A GOODD SQUEEZEE" (nodontsmi

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    • #3
      thanks =)
      aim:TillDeath1028
      yahoo: freakonaleash6981
      lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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      • #4
        read it!
        aim:TillDeath1028
        yahoo: freakonaleash6981
        lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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        • #5
          I just read a poem with a lot of end rhyme
          it made me feel like I was dying
          instead I'd rather be crying
          or flying
          or frying

          your talentless ass.

          The End and Fuck You.
          Let's see,
          I've been banned over twenty
          times, I make fun of everyone
          besides body-builders. (I give
          them the time of day). And I've
          created more new accounts
          than someone who practices
          identity theft.
          Truly, I have no life and I need
          making fun of others to replen-
          ish my self esteem.
          -Jeff (Swoll)

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          • #6
            shut the fuck up you fuckin jeliuse homo your just mad you can't write shit without it soundin like a peace of shit from the trash go die basturd!
            aim:TillDeath1028
            yahoo: freakonaleash6981
            lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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            • #7
              oh by the way I try to make it rhyme so it will sound better.
              aim:TillDeath1028
              yahoo: freakonaleash6981
              lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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              • #8
                what the hell is goin on here tonight as i say as usual
                FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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                • #9
                  ummm...ok?
                  aim:TillDeath1028
                  yahoo: freakonaleash6981
                  lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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                  • #10
                    yeh fully wat the heck is going on...u guys are behaving like bro & sis-------each of you to ur rooms NOW!

                    but i LOVED ur piece...magic...the whole rose, grave & memory concept is amazing.

                    WIKID WIKID PIECE...just one typo use were not was in the 9th line.

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                    • #11
                      I couldnt spell if my life was on the line.lol. 3;-)3
                      aim:TillDeath1028
                      yahoo: freakonaleash6981
                      lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Farmer Burton
                        yeh fully wat the heck is going on...u guys are behaving like bro & sis-------each of you to ur rooms NOW!

                        but i LOVED ur piece...magic...the whole rose, grave & memory concept is amazing.

                        WIKID WIKID PIECE...just one typo use were not was in the 9th line.
                        The "whole rose, grave and memory concept" is hackneyed as fuck. You guys should read some literature.
                        Let's see,
                        I've been banned over twenty
                        times, I make fun of everyone
                        besides body-builders. (I give
                        them the time of day). And I've
                        created more new accounts
                        than someone who practices
                        identity theft.
                        Truly, I have no life and I need
                        making fun of others to replen-
                        ish my self esteem.
                        -Jeff (Swoll)

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                        • #13
                          ^ if you think this line to suck extremely,
                          Originally posted by CrazyAndProude

                          I let the thorns of a rose cut my hand as it falls to your grave.
                          that's just one more memory I'll have to save.

                          .
                          then yes you should stick to ur literture (whatever kind of literature u'r refering to) i dont need to be educated on what reading material is beneficiary & awespiring for me... i think this is a well kept secret....fuck ur literature!

                          i appreciate you're suggestion but noway would i even bother to respect it.

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                          • #14
                            ^ You're a dumb fucking bitch, do you know that?
                            Let's see,
                            I've been banned over twenty
                            times, I make fun of everyone
                            besides body-builders. (I give
                            them the time of day). And I've
                            created more new accounts
                            than someone who practices
                            identity theft.
                            Truly, I have no life and I need
                            making fun of others to replen-
                            ish my self esteem.
                            -Jeff (Swoll)

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                            • #15
                              ^NO You are.....ohhhhhhh...you just got burned.....jk.
                              aim:TillDeath1028
                              yahoo: freakonaleash6981
                              lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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