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  • *Roxanne
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    that was touching..
    gotta give ya much props that was really good
    I wuved it!!!!

    stay Funkyfresh
    peace

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  • CrazyAndProude
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    ^NO You are.....ohhhhhhh...you just got burned.....jk.

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  • Ivan Drago
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    ^ You're a dumb fucking bitch, do you know that?

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  • elemental
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    ^ if you think this line to suck extremely,
    Originally posted by CrazyAndProude

    I let the thorns of a rose cut my hand as it falls to your grave.
    that's just one more memory I'll have to save.

    .
    then yes you should stick to ur literture (whatever kind of literature u'r refering to) i dont need to be educated on what reading material is beneficiary & awespiring for me... i think this is a well kept secret....fuck ur literature!

    i appreciate you're suggestion but noway would i even bother to respect it.

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  • Ivan Drago
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    Originally posted by Farmer Burton
    yeh fully wat the heck is going on...u guys are behaving like bro & sis-------each of you to ur rooms NOW!

    but i LOVED ur piece...magic...the whole rose, grave & memory concept is amazing.

    WIKID WIKID PIECE...just one typo use were not was in the 9th line.
    The "whole rose, grave and memory concept" is hackneyed as fuck. You guys should read some literature.

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  • CrazyAndProude
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    I couldnt spell if my life was on the line.lol. 3;-)3

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  • elemental
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    yeh fully wat the heck is going on...u guys are behaving like bro & sis-------each of you to ur rooms NOW!

    but i LOVED ur piece...magic...the whole rose, grave & memory concept is amazing.

    WIKID WIKID PIECE...just one typo use were not was in the 9th line.

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  • CrazyAndProude
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    ummm...ok?

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  • RevolutioN
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    what the hell is goin on here tonight as i say as usual

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  • CrazyAndProude
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    oh by the way I try to make it rhyme so it will sound better.

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  • CrazyAndProude
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    shut the fuck up you fuckin jeliuse homo your just mad you can't write shit without it soundin like a peace of shit from the trash go die basturd!

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  • Ivan Drago
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    I just read a poem with a lot of end rhyme
    it made me feel like I was dying
    instead I'd rather be crying
    or flying
    or frying

    your talentless ass.

    The End and Fuck You.

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  • CrazyAndProude
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    read it!

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  • CrazyAndProude
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    thanks =)

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  • YoUDonTKnoWMeE
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    good..the first lines are str88 forward
    thats cool, and everyline seems detailed
    as soon as i read, i picture the images that your
    wrighting...GOOd wOrkk dawgg

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