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    Last breath

    Verse1:
    Do you ever think why ship doesn’t sink?
    Do you ever think why we should live?
    Days, weeks, years, and by that time so many tears
    As the mind get crazy in this bubble
    The road tripping; an’ god probably smiling, when we trip or stumble.
    When our hopes are crumbled.
    When our tumbles in this life has been numbered.
    As we breathe on this earth, an’ every breath that we take
    Every time when we take a hale, our lungs an’ liver gets taint
    God casts us in his shade, an’ leaves us a cloud of dust in his trail
    This world is meant to be cemetery, we people just make it barely
    we are scum. We can't get out of this wall, we can't run.
    We are just guinea pigs in this wide universe
    An’ the earth is to us a terrible curse.
    We all are going to die, one by one.
    I can already see my sarcophagus in that forest six feet under
    The blood, the rain, the lightning and thunder.
    The fire that will soon touch the gunpowder
    My spirit will suddenly crumble, I will be stunned
    My mind will be crushed, squashed, I will feel myself tired
    The poison that will kill me
    Then I will tumble, stumble,
    I will exhale, I will be expired.
    This is how the tail will end, the plot will be drowned
    The character will be again inside of four walls
    No guide to lead the way, no friend to help
    I have no strength to make it myself.

    Chorus:
    Shadows behind me; appalling memories
    Abysmal my torture is
    Black cloud upon me; ghastly gaping
    This is the atrocious destiny; from where is no escaping
    [I'm in chasm again…
    Gonna.. take.. my.. last.. breath..]
    *inhales*

    verse2:
    The rose that should lie on me, the memories that ate me.
    The family that left me. The people who reject me.
    The music what vanished of me, the friends that didn’t defend me.
    Me, who didn’t even didn’t wanted to prevent that scene.
    I don’t know what to think anymore; so much shit I have gone through
    Maybe I should just give up, an’ wont waist no more energy
    Maybe if I die, I can go to heaven an’ be free
    Hear the bird sounds an’ lie on the clouds
    Maybe if I trust I will get out of my doubts
    Then there wouldn’t be any worries of high mounds
    Won’t have these panic strikes every minute so louds
    Maybe I wont be beaten to the ground cuz I will be stout
    I won’t throw in the towel, I will trounce
    I will be so strong to make the bounce
    I think I have decided what I will aloud.
    To take the last breath, as I have just couple minutes left.

    Shadows behind me; appalling memories
    Abysmal my torture is
    Black cloud upon me; ghastly gaping
    This is the atrocious destiny; from where is no escaping
    [I'm in chasm again…
    Gonna.. take.. my.. last.. breath..]
    *inhales*

    verse3:
    Last breath, so quick an’ uncertain
    This was my life, so please now close the curtains
    The wound cannot mend
    Torturing an’ in a way emotional as it ends
    Painful an’ in my mind I hear the knells
    The music that it plays, death is near, I wouldn’t even wanted to `em quell
    Have had send to hell an’ beaten up ‘`til my voice was a hollow
    Thought that this is my last day, I won’t make it tomorrow
    This is the start an’ the end; top an’ the bottom
    The noise an’ silence, happiness an’ sorrow
    My last inhale, as the lungs fill with fresh air
    The last look at this world
    Witch just continues its spin as a carousel; the first man been on earth
    An’ last man in the end.
    The world which is still in my eyes full of pain an’ disorder
    If I would be still on this planet, I wouldn’t make it no further
    It doesn’t matter anymore, I will fly; eternally to the place where no livin thing has been
    I'm gonna touch the sky an’ sleep on the clouds; watch the sun setting
    I finally found a place where to be; now I'm ready.
    My mind is at last serene
    Live in peace; an experience something that in I haven’t even believed.

    Shadows behind me; appalling memories
    Abysmal my torture is
    Black cloud upon me; ghastly gaping
    This is the atrocious destiny; from where is no escaping
    [I'm in chasm again…
    Gonna.. take.. my.. last.. breath..]
    *inhales*
    Last breath.. slowly, quietly..Last breath.. my last breath.. x2
    Last breath..my last *inhales*

    give some reply, bad or good..

  • #2
    goddamn, is it so hard to waist a minute to this shit?? okay..i suck..

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    • #3
      Go Laura Go! Sähän oot saanu melkeen hyviä kommentteja! Ja tsori kaikki, en jaksa ruveta enkuks vääntään ku ketäään ei kuiteskaa kiinnosta.. Nii ja saattepahan ihmetellä et mitä kieltä toi on ja mitä joku ääliö on selittäny tähän Joo hei, te voistte näyttää tältä (arguingsm ku luette tätä. Ootte tosi tyhmiä ku ette ymmärrä. Ärsyttääkö ku ette ymmärrä? Toivottavasti, mä en nimittäin haluu kirjottaa näin törkeesti ilman et se ärsyttäs ketää. Etenkää ku sormet ihan jäässä. Ei kait tääl muutes oo sensurointia? Ei varmaankaa ku tääl tohon viisii kiroillaa...

      Ihan ok piisi vissii.. Joo, mut älä aina kirjota itestäs, se alkaa puuduttaa ja kaikki muutki tekee samaa. Kerro joskus vaikka hänestä tjsp. Mut hei nyt mun sormet jäätyy.. Jotta sayonora ja adios ja kaikkee bye bye jne. Heippa ja moikka pöhkövantit ja vanteet. Ja mikä parasta, vaan suomea ymmärtävät huomaa kirjotusvirheeni 3;-)3 oonko vähän kova jätkä

      Sorry.

      Hei tätähän voi editoida! Siistii!
      Last edited by Pinttis; 03-28-2005, 11:17 AM.

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      • #4
        I think I lost a few pounds reading that stuff. Pretty grim, as for the piece itself. It wasn't bad but i'm betting you can edit a lot of it out.

        Make each word count, give each word a purpose. I'd also recommend stream-lining the subject your dealing with, symbolic imagery can only grab a reader's attention for so long, you gotta make it clear the issue being addressed here.

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