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    Ok...as some of you might know my ex is a cutter
    And it takes just as much out of you trying to help the cutter as the cutter themselves
    Ive noticed a lot of people writing poems about cutting from a first person point of view, but I will attempt to write it as a person lookin into it

    I dont know why you do it, cause pain upon yourself,
    Call me for support, but then refuse the offered help.
    Go to see you at home and I get a glimpse the scars,
    Fearing that one day you might take it too far,
    and Ill be seein and talking to you through the stars.
    Promise you'll stop, say youll never pick up the razor again,
    Next night, call me cryin, because you did it again.
    I ask you why you do it? but you cant come with a response.
    All you say is that you feel like your a person nobody wants.
    It becomes a daily routine, something thats so onscene,
    that after hearing your description it leaves my face all green.
    You have a weapon of choice, if not razors then knives,
    but what is it solving, because I can still see pain in your eyes.
    Lying to your parents, saying the cuts were simply a fluke,
    and its gotten to the point where you cant even tell me the truth.
    Done hours of research, talked to all the known doctors,
    but nothing I do or say can seem to make any kind of alter.
    Tried the guilt, but you simply broke my heart,
    gave you paper after paper, but you just tore them apart.
    Offered to get you help, but you just ran away,
    came to you with open arms but you turned my hands away.
    So what am I to do? the person I love I cant help,
    and its rubbing off upon me, because Im hating myself.
    Your dealing with something with such an unpayable fee,
    Im starting to see, that because of you theres a cutter in me.
    Last edited by G h O s T; 03-20-2005, 08:26 PM.
    Dynasty

  • #2
    nicely done man.....i can relate..a best friend of mine did that shit


    check this out:

    and now its gotten to the point where yout even tell me the truth.
    .................................................. ..........^ you can't**
    LOST
    THEN I NEVER WANT TO DIE
    I... I WANT TO LIVE FOREVER










    8.12.04

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    • #3
      Thanks for the feedback J, its really hard going through it with some one...
      Hopefully your friend is all good now...
      Good rep 4 you lol, and thanks for finding that mistake
      Dynasty

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      • #4
        sometimes ppl 4get about the person who is there for the 'victim', so thnx for the perspective. no offence but the term 'cutter' seems like its just another catergory, creepy, i didnt think ppl were into induced & reptitive suicide or whatever u call it. so its like junkie/addict? anyway its very disturbing, but i know of some ppl with some addictive probs too. i tried to help a few of friends in the past, but i dont think it was enuff, and it tuff to stick it out so props to you, for your love. they do have a disorder and i think the only person that can come close to helping them out is a long term therapist not even a partner, as you know sometimes nothing is ever enuff....some of us a re suckers...so i'm sooo happy for u that this person is an ex....guess you've paid ur dues.
        Last edited by elemental; 03-20-2005, 10:24 PM.

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        • #5
          This poem has no emotion. You focus too much on the words you're gonna use at the end of each line to rhyme instead. This is a concept with potential that will not be realized unless you get off your little "all poetry has to rhyme" kick.
          Let's see,
          I've been banned over twenty
          times, I make fun of everyone
          besides body-builders. (I give
          them the time of day). And I've
          created more new accounts
          than someone who practices
          identity theft.
          Truly, I have no life and I need
          making fun of others to replen-
          ish my self esteem.
          -Jeff (Swoll)

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          • #6
            Thank you for the feed back Farmer...
            When I talked to her about it, she said that it was never serious enough for suicide, yet its always the first thing she would turn to, so I guess in that sort it was an addiction...

            And Ivan...I rap, so I have the whole mentality of rhyming...and you seem to be the only one who claims I dont include any emotion, but its all good, cant please everyone
            Dynasty

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            • #7
              Originally posted by G h O s T
              Thank you for the feed back Farmer...
              When I talked to her about it, she said that it was never serious enough for suicide, yet its always the first thing she would turn to, so I guess in that sort it was an addiction...

              And Ivan...I rap, so I have the whole mentality of rhyming...and you seem to be the only one who claims I dont include any emotion, but its all good, cant please everyone
              Well I'm the only one who's posted that has any fucking sense. Go back down to the textcee forum, w.igger.
              Let's see,
              I've been banned over twenty
              times, I make fun of everyone
              besides body-builders. (I give
              them the time of day). And I've
              created more new accounts
              than someone who practices
              identity theft.
              Truly, I have no life and I need
              making fun of others to replen-
              ish my self esteem.
              -Jeff (Swoll)

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              • #8
                Originally posted by G h O s T
                It becomes a daily routine, something thats so onscene,
                that after hearing your description it leaves my face all green.
                Insults aside I agree with Swoll, lines such as the one above are weak and don't sound right.
                Originally posted by Deon
                Can easily make threads with 1k+ views and 100+ comments

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                • #9
                  Ivan...your calling me a w.igger for writing poetry? Comeon dude, that makes no sense at all
                  And white, as I said before I mostly rap, and yes, that line does make sense, because if you knew what I was going through youd feel the same...
                  You guys are trying to pull out hate on poetry? poetry is just an expression of how someone feels, I dont understand how the hell you could hate on how someone feels...But hey do you
                  Dynasty

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                  • #10
                    Eh think it was prettty crazy going thru that.. nice work
                    2 wins 0 Loses (2kos)
                    John420-KO'D
                    PimpmasterFlex-KO'D

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by G h O s T
                      Ivan...your calling me a w.igger for writing poetry? Comeon dude, that makes no sense at all
                      And white, as I said before I mostly rap, and yes, that line does make sense, because if you knew what I was going through youd feel the same...
                      You guys are trying to pull out hate on poetry? poetry is just an expression of how someone feels, I dont understand how the hell you could hate on how someone feels...But hey do you
                      I'm calling you a wig for being an adolescent white rapper. Besides, if this were a raw expression of your feelings, as you claim it to be, you wouldn't focus on rhyme.
                      Let's see,
                      I've been banned over twenty
                      times, I make fun of everyone
                      besides body-builders. (I give
                      them the time of day). And I've
                      created more new accounts
                      than someone who practices
                      identity theft.
                      Truly, I have no life and I need
                      making fun of others to replen-
                      ish my self esteem.
                      -Jeff (Swoll)

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                      • #12
                        When Expressing Feelings It's True There's No Need For Rhyme. But Some Have The natural talent and
                        Most Of The Time It just happens. I think you have talent Ghost. Don't let a few stupid post make you think otherwise.

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                        • #13
                          Anarchy...thank you for the feedback and the compliment, its greatly appreciated.

                          Ivan Drago

                          This message is hidden because Ivan Drago is on your ignore list.

                          ^^Thank you for your time...

                          Nevaeh...1st welcome to the board, thank you very much for the feedback, and the encouragement, its all very appreciated...
                          Dynasty

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                          • #14
                            ghost, your a natural when it comes to this shit. i read it like it was poetry, not a rap, sumthin different for me, really got me in it, i felt like i was feeling ur emotions. shit was really good,keep the poems comin.

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                            • #15
                              amazing piece
                              can really see how you felt through this poem
                              and i agree with it to some extent
                              when you try and help someone who cuts
                              you also get drawn in to it in some way and it hurts you too
                              brilliant work!
                              ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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