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    Weakened By Lies

    No point in hanging around no more for someone so deaf
    I tried to help you out as much as I could, but it was me you left
    Made promises and statements saying you wouldnít betray my trust
    But it seems that this friendship meant nothing because you wanted the lust
    You made your choice, and thatís what you have to live with
    You just overreacted as if without him you just couldnít live

    No life revolves around another person, no matter what people say
    Love may make it seem like that, but no one can live their life that way
    You made me think that you were in control; I thought that you were strong
    But now I see through what you really are, and realised that I was wrong
    I tried to get you to listen; I thought with time that you would learn
    Though you just reject what I say, and you donít realise each time you burn

    I canít help how I feel right now, have a little hate for you
    Everything I say of course, is just from my own point of view
    I canít help it though but I just have to feel sorry for everything
    You lie about what you say, and I know what tomorrow will bring

    You donít know how much this hurts me, feels like Iíve lost my mind
    And all I can do is watch the days go by, as I convince myself Iím fine
    Donít know if you realise, but I took heed to your words & your advice
    But now when I try to help you out, all you do is tell me lies
    I regret what I tried to do now; youíve just left me in a foolish spot
    Always said you appreciate me, well hey, thanks a fucking lot!

    I donít wanna hurt you, and I donít want you to crumble and fall
    But every time this comes around, you hesitate and then you stall
    Youíre statements are false, untrue, maybe thatís just how you are
    Iíve always tried to reach out to you, but you just distance yourself too far
    No more hope with trying to deal with this when it ends in failure
    I canít help you no more when you just ignore me, no where else to turn

    Donít blame me for how I feel, when I say I have a little hate for you
    But sure it doesnít matter, because itís just a personal point of view
    I donít know what to say but I just feel sorry about everything
    You lied about what you said, and I always predict what tomorrow will bring

    I triedÖto be a friend to you Ė if you needed help you just had to seek
    Apparently it was useless though, because it seems you were just too weak
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

  • #2
    Damn I wish I was artistic - great poem

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    • #3
      Originally posted by SneakySnufflez
      Weakened By Lies

      No point in hanging around no more for someone so deaf
      I tried to help you out as much as I could, but it was me you left
      Made promises and statements saying you wouldnít betray my trust
      But it seems that this friendship meant nothing because you wanted the lust
      You made your choice, and thatís what you have to live with
      You just overreacted as if without him you just couldnít live

      No life revolves around another person, no matter what people say
      Love may make it seem like that, but no one can live their life that way
      You made me think that you were in control; I thought that you were strong
      But now I see through what you really are, and realised that I was wrong
      I tried to get you to listen; I thought with time that you would learn
      Though you just reject what I say, and you donít realise each time you burn

      I canít help how I feel right now, have a little hate for you
      Everything I say of course, is just from my own point of view
      I canít help it though but I just have to feel sorry for everything
      You lie about what you say, and I know what tomorrow will bring

      You donít know how much this hurts me, feels like Iíve lost my mind
      And all I can do is watch the days go by, as I convince myself Iím fine
      Donít know if you realise, but I took heed to your words & your advice
      But now when I try to help you out, all you do is tell me lies
      I regret what I tried to do now; youíve just left me in a foolish spot
      Always said you appreciate me, well hey, thanks a fucking lot!

      I donít wanna hurt you, and I donít want you to crumble and fall
      But every time this comes around, you hesitate and then you stall
      Youíre statements are false, untrue, maybe thatís just how you are
      Iíve always tried to reach out to you, but you just distance yourself too far
      No more hope with trying to deal with this when it ends in failure
      I canít help you no more when you just ignore me, no where else to turn

      Donít blame me for how I feel, when I say I have a little hate for you
      But sure it doesnít matter, because itís just a personal point of view
      I donít know what to say but I just feel sorry about everything
      You lied about what you said, and I always predict what tomorrow will bring

      I triedÖto be a friend to you Ė if you needed help you just had to seek
      Apparently it was useless though, because it seems you were just too weak
      this wack piss of shit is as elementary n childish as ya momma ya dumbshited common kissin nut hook .

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      • #4
        ^Love you too

        Thank ya 5150Girl
        ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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        • #5
          I liked it! It was deep. But the rhymes could be a little more complex.
          no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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          • #6
            true but its not the rhyming that matters its the meaning in between the lines..

            Originally posted by 5150girl
            Damn I wish I was artistic - great poem
            same wish i was artistic 2;-{}2


            ..great poem gemma..
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            .... isuru

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            • #7
              when i read the first two lines i knew this would be good, nice work )
              Hell Yeah I'm South African...bring on the hate!

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              • #8
                Sneaky Snufflez.....That was soooo good...came from the heart...thank you for sharing it...meant alot..Peace...

                the unspoken is always heard, the unseen is always felt...so don't f**k with me!...

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                • #9
                  awesome how the *weakened by lies* is the tone of the poem. that message & feeling is clearly communicated.

                  CLEVER CLEVER GAL!!!

                  (K) (K) (K)

                  lov ya

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by Lyrical Ninja
                    this wack piss of shit is as elementary n childish as ya momma ya dumbshited common kissin nut hook .

                    ^what's eatin his ass? This has to be a guy posting.....b/c 99.9% of the men out there seem to have NO PROBLEM showing the rest of the world what a dipshit they really are, deep down inside. Girls at least have dignity to save face.

                    As far as your poem goes Sneak....I loved it. I'm feelin the same way about my hubby right now. It sucks to do so much for someone, and when you reach out to them in return (for support, etc.)...even though they are right in front of you...it's almost like they're a transparent mist. There's just nothing there after awhile, no matter how hard you try to hold on to it. Keep the poems coming girl. you're doing a great job.
                    Life is what you make it.

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                    • #11
                      deep really good i thought it was fine

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