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    The End Of Life

    The inevitable darkness strikes again and again,
    I try to describe the incredible pain with my pen,
    Because it's sad to witness people meeting their end,
    If I could stop this I would probably do it, but I can't,
    Oh man, I should really just accept it as a part of life,
    Or maybe not, because I just have this urge to survive,
    All I want to do is just to search for this wife,
    Start a family, without being disturbed by the time,
    I just want to be happy, forever and never be sad,
    If i think about the restrictions we have, I just get mad,
    Just think about it for a minute, really we all live to die,
    I just want to live without beign scared to sleep at night,
    Maybe I won't be able to wake up to enjoy the bright daylight,
    I'm afraid of tomorrow's sorrow, another life taken away,
    And although I don't believe in God really all I can do is pray,
    And just hope that one day, we're able to stay here,
    Without having to leave earth, or even think that the end is near,
    But everybody goes sometime, damn, I guess it's just everybody's fate.

    I just wrote it, and I want to improve it a bit more, please leave feedback.

  • #2
    I personally don't see any errors at all. You speak some real shit in the poem. I really liked it, so keep up the good work, son.
    P!

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    • #3
      any more..?

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