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  • Seven Years

    So many tears
    lost in a vice
    endless in size.
    So many fears
    lonely moments of agony
    in the shoes of a wanna be.
    So many beers
    drowned in the bottle
    burning the nectars throttle.
    In just seven years
    from the top of the mountain
    to the soil of the fountain.
    So many jeers
    moments of blissful sin
    unknown to my next of kin.
    So little cheers
    my only wonderful time
    dropped at the toss of a dime.
    Oh how the end nears
    all in just seven more years.

  • #2
    I interpreted this poem (and it could be wrong) out to be like your some kind of entertainer who has been at the top, where you can't enjoy the "view" and things aren't as simple as when you were at the bottom, and how it's all going to be at "the end" when....perhaps....a contract is up in "seven more years"? I'm probably way off....but, it's how the poem sounded to me. Good work though.
    Life is what you make it.

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    • #3
      realyy gooooooooooooooooood poem i heart it

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      • #4
        Nice poem ..

        *The FreeStyLe Church*

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        • #5
          I didnt realy like this one for some strange reason i dont know why i just dont, i liked your other bu this one just aint the same. dont stop you good at it. keep it up
          OH HAI!

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          • #6
            I really liked this...don't know what about it exactly

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            • #7
              Lonelioness you came close, but its a poem actually about me and my alcoholism, but thank you so much, I always knew I was a bit of an entertainer when I was drunk. And thank you all for your comments.

              Gil

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