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  • Wilted rose (please give me honest opinions)

    Heres the image but if its too hard to read just read the text below

    http://tinypic.com/2l1aaf

    My heart is like a wilted rose,
    I look down in disgrace and cover my face.
    Lifeless on the end of my tether,
    Love I can no longer endeavour.

    My lips are like a summer sunset,
    Warm and tender but too distant to touch.
    Lusting for that first moment of bliss
    But my sun always sets when we kiss.

    My eyes are like an angels wings
    Tattered and torn, betrayed of all trust.
    Glistening when you show me a sign.
    Now I know that you'll never be mine.


    http://www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=194042
    http://www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=191973
    http://www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=194455
    Last edited by user unknown; 04-04-2005, 01:27 PM.

  • #2
    Please read the rules..

    First Rule of the Poetry Forum - - Before you post your own poetry, you have to respond to at least two other threads which are not your own. When creating your own thread, post links to the two which you replied.


    EDIT: Don't need to roll your eyes, and it's not to keep the admins or mods happy.. it's called a strategy to promote activity in a forum that is in need of it.
    Last edited by Psycho69; 04-04-2005, 12:25 PM.
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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    • #3
      ok

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      • #4
        oh come one somebody?

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        • #5
          ........wow thats deep!......im really feelen it! Nice work!
          SLOWLY TAKING OVER THE WORLD
          sKitelZ ~
          http://www.myspace.com/samanthawuvsu

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          • #6
            ^ i agree, that poem was so emotional, i the end!!


            hey soz if uve bin on b4 and ive missed u but skitles i aint seen u online 4 ages, welcome back!!
            ...Gurl on da Mike



            3;-)3

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            • #7
              thank god i got replies lol i was wondering if it was awful or something.


              Thanks guys

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              • #8
                no fuckin way is it awful, it had sum really raw feelin in it
                ...Gurl on da Mike



                3;-)3

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                • #9
                  What I enjoyed about it was it got str8 to the point.

                  Too many poems on here are laced with flowery language, but no real meaning lies within them.

                  This poem had no "filler"........................Good

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                  • #10
                    I'm weird like that. Sometimes my poems are straight to the point....and sometimes they go on forever lol

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                    • #11
                      it was expressed very well, full of beauty, love and emotion......

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                      • #12
                        it made me think of my 1st kiss 4 some reason...well i never had my 1st kiss...*confused face*well mabe i was just imaging my 1st kiss?...it was really goo d i (U) it..except not a broken heart.lol keep it up-missy

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