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  • MC Fresh
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    ye id do that if i were u

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  • Big Joe
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    It's actually the first two letters of my name, but maybe I should ask Jason to change my name to Big Joe

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  • MC Fresh
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    jo aint a girly name lol i just wasnt sure becasue were im from its spelt joe if your a lad and jo if your a girl

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  • Big Joe
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    You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to gap2gap again.

    And I'm a man, with a girly name ha ha

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  • Big Joe
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    thanks a lot, and about the hate thing, i think it wasn't meant as serious as it was written. either way, i hope it wasn't

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  • MC Fresh
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    it seems really powerfull and deep i lreally liked this one. and i heard your gettin some hate or something well i think it was you, anyway good work

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  • Big Joe
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    This poem was posted and written on the same day as 'Change', but never replied to.

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    started a topic Bleeding Eyes (Too Much Of Everything)

    Bleeding Eyes (Too Much Of Everything)

    Here's a poem I wanted to write for a long time...

    Bleeding Eyes (Too Much Of Everything)

    Walking as part of a destruction plan
    Seeing how we use the trash can
    Is it to use, or is it too basic to think of

    And while the visuals are pinned on my retinas
    It comes with rustling
    Because this isn't to what I was geared to

    But although we start to think about it more often
    It's somehow to when the prices are up
    Reaching their top coming within a gas pipe

    And surely I don't want to await in fear all the time
    So I just be a part for most of the time
    Trying to profit on the translation
    In handwritten ink on this breathless piece
    Till earth can't give us no more, and it becomes a matter of time

    And without a direct answer to how and when
    We switch off and enjoy our dinner
    As we can't do anything out of the norm

    Because we can't stop wondering how we are perceived
    By the people closely around us
    While they could be on the same page with bleeding eyes
    Watching how the waste and greed continues
    As we can't see it's another prejudice playing parts

    2005 J. Baak

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