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  • Heart & The Wire (Poetry Version, Nothing like the freestle)

    Heart & The Wire

    I need an angel to get me back on my feet
    Im not obnoctiuos i just dont admit defeat
    I wont lie when i say i need help with my problem
    I shouldnt be goin through this shit because i cant solve them
    Say what the fuck you want about me in your speech
    I need an angel but shes outta site, outta my reach
    I dont need to take nothing back i need to make everything better
    This isnt about love its about wishing i hated her since the day i met her


    My heart goes into the wire and rips it apart
    I could cry but instead i just shed the blood so you remember me in your heart


    My pain is something that i should not know but i do
    This is not about you and me its about all this shit being through
    If i can change one thing i should be able to change them all
    Dont cry for me when god calls just take my picture off your wall
    The world is already fucked and lifes already been hard
    But i'll be burning in hell if i dont make atleast one record
    I dont plan to give up and i'll be damned if i go out soft
    Im not bothered what happens now coz whatever does i know i aint lost


    My heart goes into the wire and rips it apart
    I could cry but instead i just shed the blood so you remember me in your heart


    If you could just feel my pain you'd know what to do
    But you dont and you never will and nearly everything i said was true
    This is to you, but yu dont know what i need
    I aint no bullshitter or a quitter but iamthe new breed
    No matter what happens i'm a slave to death
    No matter what i go through listen to me untill my last breath
    I can say plenty of meaningfull things all day if you let me write
    But i promise to each and everyone of you i aint goin out without a fight


    My heart goes into the wire and rips it apart
    I could cry but instead i just shed the blood so you remember me in your heart


    Just let me talk and listen to my voice and everything i say
    I aint all that religiuos but i aint shy to a pray
    I can admit to cryin and im not bothered what your mouth runs
    Coz your the ones gonna be burning in hell with the demons
    So say what you want to coz i dont really care
    But i will attack without warning so be aware
    And i didnt even say i was hard but i said i know how to fight
    But i promise you from birth to death no mater what happens i'm gonna be alright
    OH HAI!

  • #2
    really good loved the flow
    really loved the message
    Bored? CHECK IT!
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jz1NNr2_dfw

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    • #3
      thanks
      OH HAI!

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      • #4
        yes, it's really good
        keep it up
        Ma Crew's Soundclick:
        86 Regiment
        Yung Murda - Mudlark - Ruffneck
        FUCK A CREW WE A SYSTEM

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        • #5
          i thought id try and different concept and it worked
          OH HAI!

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          • #6
            Maaaan!!! you really got me on this one kiddo, very powerful, great flow and great message. It's nice to see you try different concept's, it's what makes you better!....keep up the great work!....
            YoU Can'T HurT wHat'S No lONger ThERe.... wITh nO heArT...I dOn't FUCKEN CARE

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            • #7
              thanks girl i like the feedback thanks everyone
              OH HAI!

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