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    Alright peoples...This is kind of a perspective through my eyes, of how I've grown up and matured over the years...Enjoy, actually somewhat personal

    Growing through the years, simply going through the tears,
    As I live my life...Trying to steadily sew through my fears.
    A shy young man, was scared to look another in the eye.
    My mother by my side, teaching me, and me wondering why...
    Good in elementary school, passed at the top of my class,
    And went into middle...Then the top tumbled and crashed.
    A personality change hit, and I wasn't the person I was,
    Tried to be tough, as I tried to impress the person I loved...
    The grades began to slide, and the real me began to hide,
    My parents tried to question, and that's when I began to lie.
    Portrayed the life style that I thought would get accepted,
    And when I thought I was cool, that's when I got rejected...
    But I kept on the path...Still portraying a life of lies,
    Still slacking off and being dumb, despite my parents cries...
    My friends would leave my side, as that would hit me roughly
    Because I'd turn my back, and now I amounted to nothing...
    Over several years, I remained lost and confused,
    As I'd left my own head and thoughts, battled and bruised...
    Sophomore year came...And that's when I began to change,
    I'd met a special person, and my life she began to rearrange.
    I would mature over the year, into a person I was happy to be,
    Outgoing, loving, determined, and always happy with glee.
    The slacking came to a stop, and I through out all the lies,
    And I told my parents the truth...And I was done with the lies...
    Maturity comes with age and knowledge you gain with growth,
    It comes with failure, and the love from who means the most...
    Comes with help from family, a friend, or someone special to you,
    And when you find this state of mind, it's both special and true...

    Yes, this poem is about my life, and how I've changed and grown,
    But I just wanted to tell you how I feel and I wanted you to know...
    You are that special person, whose influenced me in ways...
    And helped me be the person that you see standing here today.
    Although we rarely talk, I still think of you all the time,
    As I know that through everything you'll be there by my side...
    Dynasty

  • #2
    nice one bro

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    • #3
      Great poem, I like it a lot

      ~RIP Proof~
      They say the good die young...


      http://www.one.org/Addmyvoice.aspx

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      • #4
        gooooooooooooooooooood stuff man

        My friends would leave my side, as that would hit me roughly
        Because I'd turn my back, and now I amounted to nothing...
        Over several years, I remained lost and confused,
        As I'd left my own head and thoughts, battled and bruised
        that wuz mah fave part...
        your portrayal of yourself through your words is juss amazin
        Bored? CHECK IT!
        http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jz1NNr2_dfw

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        • #5
          Thanks for the feedback everybody...It'd greatly appreciated...
          Break, I love getting feedback from you, thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts
          Dynasty

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          • #6
            oops i never new that i wont do it any more

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            • #7
              I loved it. The flow was nearly flawless. You chose nice words. You stayed on topic and the topic was very original in my eyes. Keep Up The Good Work.

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