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  • I'm in Love, but have yet to Meet You

    Reviewed:
    http://d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=241920
    http://d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=238159


    So much passion confined in my soul
    With no one to give it to.
    Itís like I could make fire, but have no coal
    Iím in love, but have yet to meet you.

    I sense you in my dreams each and every night
    But your face is always a blur.
    I long for sleep so that we may reunite
    Yet what I need is a real love. For this, I am sure.

    I foolishly wait for you to abscond with my heart
    But deep down I doubt you will show.
    The thought of eternal loneliness tears me apart
    Is that my fate? I just want to know.


    ~Feedback would be appreciated

    ~RIP Proof~
    They say the good die young...


    http://www.one.org/Addmyvoice.aspx

  • #2
    I really liked it. It's how I used to feel when I was younger, and completely infatuated with Eminem. So I can definitely relate.
    no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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    • #3
      haha thanks

      ~RIP Proof~
      They say the good die young...


      http://www.one.org/Addmyvoice.aspx

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      • #4
        very romantic indeed.............dont doubt however...believe..thus know....

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        • #5
          i like alwyz like your comments farmer burton

          poem is really good, definitely like the feel of it, and i can def relate
          Bored? CHECK IT!
          http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jz1NNr2_dfw

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          • #6
            I really liked your poem. It was short and easy to understand, but held so much meaning and very simple for many people to relate to. Great job.
            Life is what you make it.

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