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    Maybe we could talk someday maybe walk the streets
    I aint that kid tryna get you under the bed sheets
    I just wanna get to know you and learn some more
    I've lost the key to my heart your gonna have to bust down the door
    You dont wanna get involved with something like me
    Im from the hood so im more than you see
    I have to cover up my real person so i dont get stabbed in the back
    I aint a druggie or nothing but im not sayin that i didnt use to mack
    But see i've known you for about 6 months now and we've never been alone
    I can be your king girl and i'll let you sit on my throne


    Hood Love
    What type of mentality do you need to get a lady
    I aint evil or backstabing but its the hood that made me this shady
    Hood Love


    Maybe one day we'll look back on this and laugh
    But thats years away yet see i can do the math
    I can show you what it means to be growin up like this
    It takes the piss
    But you can be my release from my place, my home
    I'll try my best to give you a better life than you have shown
    If only you could look at me with that little bit of trust
    If only i could look at you and not think your the love that i lust
    The pain and my tears you've seen them all
    But i'll never be with you so ima after stand tall


    Hood Love
    What type of mentality do you need to get a lady
    I aint evil or backstabing but its the hood that made me this shady
    Hood Love


    Girl im from the hood but it aint like your stuck up
    I know you got your problems girl but im fucked up
    See i could treat you right like now that your not
    IM one of your best friends and i dont wanna loose what i already got
    See my head cant handle much stress but thats all im gettin
    And you've been treated like shit since the day you met him
    Fuck him hes never there for you but i always am
    One day your gonna know how i feel but damn
    Whys shit gotta be so hard for a boy from the hood
    And shits too hard and ima leave it as soon as i should


    Hood Love
    What type of mentality do you need to get a lady
    I aint evil or backstabing but its the hood that made me this shady
    Hood Love
    Last edited by MC Fresh; 08-28-2005, 03:29 PM.
    OH HAI!

  • #2
    sweet as dude!

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    • #3
      thanks it aitn finished though
      OH HAI!

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      • #4
        sounds pretty good so far
        though it reminds me a lot of a song by T.O.K. called "I Believe", the last verse really.

        T.O.K. - I Believe

        But I believe, love is the answer
        I Believe, love will find a way
        I believe, love is the answer
        I believe, love will find a way

        I’ve been dating Lisa now, for little over a year
        She says she’d never been so happy, but Lisa lives in fear
        That one day Daddy’s gonna find out that she’s in love
        With a thug from the street
        Oh how he would lose it then, but she’s still here with me
        ‘Cause she believes that love will see us through
        And he will understand
        She sees me as a person, and not just a black man


        you poem has a sort of different vibe, but I think it's going in the same direction as that song.

        I like it though, will be nice to see it finished
        ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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        • #5
          ye i couldnt finish writin it up coz i had to go somewere but ima finish it later today
          OH HAI!

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          • #6
            damn good for it 2 be unfinished
            All i can be is me so please accept me

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            • #7
              well its finished now
              OH HAI!

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              • #8
                nice last verse

                i liked it!

                overall itz a real good piece!
                ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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                • #9
                  thanks, im realy proud of this peice
                  OH HAI!

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                  • #10
                    It was okay.

                    I think you should edit it and fix the typos and add the right punctuation and maybe fix some of the wording so it makes more sense.

                    I guess I just wasn't really feelin' this one....
                    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                    Let the night be too dark for me to see
                    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                    • #11
                      ^by that he means, u suck.

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                      • #12
                        man i'd like to see you write down your feelings and shit down in this form of text

                        edit: to baltzer
                        OH HAI!

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                        • #13
                          I think that is pretty good. You got skills.. It was a pleasure to read this
                          hell naw!

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                          • #14
                            thanks, i like gettin feed and i repay you with reps
                            OH HAI!

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