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    the poems I responded 2:Hood love by gap2gap & coming undone by Aerotisma



    We adjustin 2 our baby being here...
    in spirit & flesh...
    we're going through our trials
    & tribulations...
    we are like a unique tree...
    some things are sweet...
    Except the occasional sour grapes...
    I wouldn't be real If I didn't say....
    The different emotions you put me through...
    Hatin you wanting you outta my life...
    Lovin you more than I can explain....
    I'm like a train wreck...I'm SCATTERED
    Everywhere all fucked up in side....
    you got my mind twisted up in you
    My thoughts can't skip you...
    you keep me warm....secure
    sometimes you freak my heart out...
    I want you by my side....
    My confidence is confused & shy....
    What I want I don't know...
    your touch melts my soul....
    I never want 2 let go....
    yet you make my eyes burn...
    I'm all outta cries...
    I havent decided what I need...
    I'm bleedin in my ponderin thoughts..
    you got me guessin in mind trips....
    I wish you'll tell me the truth...
    what your feelings inside thinks...
    I love you so much.....
    I want you 2 leave me alone...
    I never want you 2 let me go...
    see what i'm tryin 2 understand...
    other than you man....
    is where I wanna be...other than...
    mixed up confused in you ...
    I want your love...
    intertwined in my affection us 1
    for our sons sake...
    sometimes you can't..get what you want..
    A family & thats the truth...



    This aint a new poem
    All i can be is me so please accept me

  • #2
    damn I mein I posted this poem along time ago even replied to 2 poems aint nobody readin my poem
    All i can be is me so please accept me

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    • #3
      Confused and rambles. Perhaps that's what it wants to present. I can see it all. It tells a common tale of babies being born to babies. A product of broken homes and fathers gone. I'm more interested in why you picked it to represent your skill. There are a lot of topics in the world. Why this? I just started on this site. Perhaps there is more of you that I haven't as yet run across. I like the format of verse. The puncuations (...) gives it rythem. A lot better then probably I could do. You thought a lot about each line in order to do that.
      http://www.pimpology.org/board/viewforum.php?f=19

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      • #4
        I'm 24 not a babie
        All i can be is me so please accept me

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