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    Okay, first off this is not my poem. My best friend Brittney wrote it, and she knows I post my shit here, so she asked if I would post this so she could hear what people think of it cause she doesn't have access to message boards. So if you leave some feedback, I'll rep.

    Suck it up, get over it,
    That's what you taught me to do.
    But oh what irony,
    All the while that I learned, I fell in love with you.

    Through these eyes there's something you'd never guess,
    There's something you don't know.
    The way I see you has never changed,
    Since I saw you two years ago.

    Every week, every day, every second,
    Anytime.
    I'll always watch from far away,
    Wishing you were mine.

    When you speak to me,
    I never know how to respond.
    It's like I'm swimming in an ocean,
    When I belong in a pond.

    To know that you notice me,
    Drives me up the wall.
    Because one second we're great old friends,
    And then I'm not there at all.

    Lies and secrets are my church,
    While paranoia is my God.
    I shouldn't touch you with a ten-foot pole,
    But reluctantly I prod.

    Living in a fantasy,
    I'm floating up in the clouds.
    But then reality gets it's grip,
    And pulls me briskly back down.

    Future and fait,
    Are just so simply in my hands.
    But never would I speak the words,
    Until I know where I stand.

    To give you up,
    Just might suffice.
    But that would kill me oh so amply,
    My greatest sacrifice.

    So I'll go on in masquerade,
    In masks and leather gloves.
    I'll reap what you sew, and sew what you reap.
    A superlative crop of tough love.

    ~RIP Proof~
    They say the good die young...


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    nice one man, there's some good lines in there
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