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    ditch dept level of ones hope and faith;
    for the break up wasnt a letter, but a will wrote in place;
    and they don't feel the same, only sending heart beats
    to receiving nothing, killing its soul due to the heart thief.
    feel like life's lost, but its still trying to renew it.
    attempts with no results and with a soft cry it knew it;
    couldnt replace the empty spot in its empty thoughts;
    trying to obtain happiness that many others got.
    tears of pain and bottled feelings, no deciding whats worse.
    even if it'll find it, it's probably dying first;
    and it'll never come to a conclusion, its still trying to restore
    the feeling of being wanted, what was once inside before.
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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    that was really deep man, very good, i aint seen much of you lately, were u been?
    OH HAI!

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    • #3
      i dont write poetry too much anymore and ive been busy with school too much to really rap

      u can catch me in the graphic threads, i'll start becoming more active with poems though

      anymore feedback? feedback = 100+ rep
      Originally posted by Realize
      evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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        uppin
        Originally posted by Realize
        evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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        • #5
          I like it a lot. Very deep and meaningful

          ~RIP Proof~
          They say the good die young...


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          • #6
            i'll rep you when i can, ive given out 2 much the last 24 hours

            uppin
            Originally posted by Realize
            evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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            • #7
              Originally posted by gap2gap
              that was really deep man, very good..
              ^^^
              yea....from the heart kinda shit i like it...real nice
              Pittsburgh Playa

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