running low

[Manar]

Not bad, you're talented.

[dakid3478]

yo this another good one cuz, do you write professionaly?

[@Mathers]

I take it as a compliment.

[Psycho69]

who is giving up on whom?
you're so good! I'd like to be your first "stan", but when I look around I notice I can't. There are already some... how come - your name is unknown entity?
I didn't want to let this go.

You're creepy.

[@Mathers]

who is giving up on whom?
you're so good! I'd like to be your first "stan", but when I look around I notice I can't. There are already some... how come - your name is unknown entity?

I didn't want to let this go.

[Kali]

It's good as it is.. Don't worry about it.

[unknown entity]

thanks for the comments guys, i wanted to edit this a little but my computer isnt letting me..so i guess it stays as is

[DavidThrows]

you look like your 4 writes from a golden lace
poem

[MC Fresh]

ye man you are a great poet you know that dont ya, and ye goin through shit does make you write alot better well, it does for me and for that poem it was incredible like all your peices, good job.

[unknown entity]

thanks aero, i guess the upside to going through shit is that it gives you something to write about

[Kali]

Wow. That was incredible. You are an awesome poet. It was beautiful.

[unknown entity]

i cant figure you out
and im tired of trying
ive heard all the excuses
im not the one being abusive
you've confused this
whole situation enough
and i wish i could forgive you
without forgetting too much

im running low
my sheets are calling my name
maybe ill see you again

you said softly "baby please
its been so long, dont give up on me"
this irony is the cruelest joke
while you hang yourself
with that ruined rope
and im take sleeping pills
a can of beast with benadryl
so i can crash so fast asleep
and think again
"why did you give up on me?"

this tank is empty
my friends think im crazy
but ill see you soon

second chances and second glances
yeah this wont be as good
the second time around
that's why i take it lying down
with you on top..
you call it making love
i call it making up
that every things the way it was

im running low
my sheets are calling my name
ill see you soon i hope