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  • Manar
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    Not bad, you're talented.

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  • dakid3478
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    yo this another good one cuz, do you write professionaly?

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  • @Mathers
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    I take it as a compliment.

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  • Psycho69
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    Originally posted by @Mathers
    who is giving up on whom?
    you're so good! I'd like to be your first "stan", but when I look around I notice I can't. There are already some... how come - your name is unknown entity?
    I didn't want to let this go.
    You're creepy.

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  • @Mathers
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    who is giving up on whom?
    you're so good! I'd like to be your first "stan", but when I look around I notice I can't. There are already some... how come - your name is unknown entity?

    I didn't want to let this go.

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  • Kali
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    It's good as it is.. Don't worry about it.

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  • unknown entity
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    thanks for the comments guys, i wanted to edit this a little but my computer isnt letting me..so i guess it stays as is

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  • DavidThrows
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    you look like your 4 writes from a golden lace
    poem

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  • MC Fresh
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    ye man you are a great poet you know that dont ya, and ye goin through shit does make you write alot better well, it does for me and for that poem it was incredible like all your peices, good job.

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  • unknown entity
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    thanks aero, i guess the upside to going through shit is that it gives you something to write about

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  • Kali
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    Wow. That was incredible. You are an awesome poet. It was beautiful.

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  • unknown entity
    started a topic running low

    running low

    i cant figure you out
    and im tired of trying
    ive heard all the excuses
    im not the one being abusive
    you've confused this
    whole situation enough
    and i wish i could forgive you
    without forgetting too much

    im running low
    my sheets are calling my name
    maybe ill see you again

    you said softly "baby please
    its been so long, dont give up on me"
    this irony is the cruelest joke
    while you hang yourself
    with that ruined rope
    and im take sleeping pills
    a can of beast with benadryl
    so i can crash so fast asleep
    and think again
    "why did you give up on me?"

    this tank is empty
    my friends think im crazy
    but ill see you soon

    second chances and second glances
    yeah this wont be as good
    the second time around
    that's why i take it lying down
    with you on top..
    you call it making love
    i call it making up
    that every things the way it was

    im running low
    my sheets are calling my name
    ill see you soon i hope

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