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    The Suicide Note


    To enter this world is hard so whys it easy to go
    And if you live more than once then what was i before
    Some times i wanna cry but only anger comes out
    Then when i do cry i blow my whole heart out
    Too much stuff its going on at once and im ready to quit
    And all the stuff is stuff that im never gonna be able to forget
    I could take all my pain out by writin out my soul
    I wanna make something of myself but i aint never gonna acheive that goal
    Aint never gonna get the love that i need so bad
    Except off my family and i really do love you dad
    No matter what i say i love my grandma and i know shes lookin down
    But i know i aint makin her proud im probably makin her frown


    To all the people that dont show love
    When you read this im gonna be lookin from above


    People think that im a waste of space and dont deserve to live
    I've gave all i can people what else do you think i can give
    But i know what thing that will make alot of people smile
    Im goin, im gone, you aint gonna see me again and i hope you fucker get in denial
    I aint grown up yet but i think im too mature for my age
    Plus it feels like i cant live and its like im trapped in a cage
    Fuck this i dont really care coz people dont care what im like
    And before i go ima get them people who jumped my brother for his bike
    Wear that ring on my finger that scared his face
    Im gone after the 3rd verse coz im a discrace
    See you soon, hope you read the end
    You know all that i ever wanted was a special friend


    To all the people that dont show love
    When you read this im gonna be lookin from above


    After this its it no more takin the piss outta my joke
    Thats called a life and im also tired of bein broke
    I dont like that i got no one that i can leave my trust with
    And to all the people i did wrong to i dont forgive
    I would be liein if i said i never got an sorry sorrow
    But i just wanted a heart to borrow
    A heart to keep and body to hug and a hand to hold
    And i aint got a soul to speak coz the devils to it coz its sold
    For shit and nothing cam good off it
    Apart from an anger problem and a big break down fit
    So bye for ever and i know you'll keep me in your heart deep down
    You wont admit it but every now and then you'll show a frown


    To all the people that dont show love
    When you read this im gonna be lookin from above
    Last edited by MC Fresh; 09-05-2005, 04:44 PM.
    OH HAI!

  • #2
    That is so positive about 3 blocks from me this lady jumped off a building if she wrote like you her life would be straightend up!!
    I HAVE ALL THE ROCK I CAN HANDLE

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    • #3
      well i feel sorry for her family and friends and i too beleive that poetry and listenin to music is like medcine and can make you feel better. thanks for the feed man, hope you stay active around here coz i liked your poem
      OH HAI!

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      • #4
        wgo the fuck bad repped me sayin that the poem sucked you could have atleast left your name and i really couldnt give a fuck if you liked it or not coz your prolly just a little fucked up pussy angry at the world coz you gettin dissed over the internet now fuckin show yourself you fuck
        OH HAI!

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        • #5
          it was me.. nah i playin man, nice job. i could def. feel what you were saying and i liked the repitition. thats a tool i use alot when i write and i find it to be effective. keep it up bro
          .

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          • #6
            it was me.. nah im playin man, nice job. i could def. feel what you were saying and i liked the repitition. thats a tool i use alot when i write and i find it to be effective. keep it up bro
            .

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            • #7
              ye thats what i was kinda goin for, thanks
              OH HAI!

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              • #8
                hey, i havent been in this section so long.. nice job as u always do..
                here my fav parts:

                To enter this world is hard so whys it easy to go
                And if you live more than once then what was i before

                I could take all my pain out by writin out my soul
                I wanna make something of myself but i aint never gonna acheive that goal

                See you soon, hope you read the end
                You know all that i ever wanted was a special friend

                After this its it no more takin the piss outta my joke
                Thats called a life and im also tired of bein broke
                I dont like that i got no one that i can leave my trust with
                And to all the people i did wrong to i dont forgive
                I would be liein if i said i never got an sorry sorrow
                But i just wanted a heart to borrow
                A heart to keep and body to hug and a hand to hold
                And i aint got a soul to speak coz the devils to it coz its sold
                R M Nixon


                Turkish Talk, Music & More

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                • #9
                  hey i really liked it, its exactly how i feel sometimes thanks for writing it.

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                  • #10
                    thanks for the brilliant feed
                    OH HAI!

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                    • #11
                      Gap thats the first person i see that speaks rep see ya buddy
                      I HAVE ALL THE ROCK I CAN HANDLE

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                      • #12
                        its so refreshing to come across a piece like this, i really enjoyed it
                        Hell Yeah I'm South African...bring on the hate!

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                        • #13
                          sorry i didnt leave ya feedback sooner, i been busy with stuff

                          but anyways, i liked alot of this song, but the vocab could of been better

                          keep it up with the poetry homie
                          Originally posted by Realize
                          evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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                          • #14
                            beautiful..keep posting..and is it ok if i post it on my website?
                            Ruby<3z:
                            Oscarpmr,TheMan,Dozmin,Rog,timmy,@#$,Rilana,Stickz2004,Steve--o,civic,DJW,Realize,Crazyandproude,=W=,DrkAim,BiSONN,

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                            • #15
                              ye course you can post it on ya website, as long as i get to see it on there thanks for all the feedback
                              OH HAI!

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