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    Bloody gaps in my life, the cracks wont dry;
    I'm already dead since I'm living a sacrifice.
    I'm dead but breathing, thats how my life has got me feeling.
    If death was on paper, my life has a laminated copy.
    Fed up with peers in this contaminated society.
    The stress at the end of the day has created anxiety;
    trying to construct a decent establishment in times of backstabbing
    of friends and my priorities; the lack of respect people are having;
    has got me questing my methods, because my brain is obsessed to be perfection;
    but life isnt always that way, and i need protection.
    As im under the spot light and i oppose photosynthesis.
    This is my life in a cell and there's no time period of sentences.
    There's just a lifetime of living with a mind that's presence with vexation
    has got me going crazy, feels like my flesh is scraping.
    Let me out!
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

  • #2
    now that was a poem, i really felt your anger
    I'm dead but breathing, thats how my life has got me feeling
    that was my favourtie line it just went tongether so well. do you mind checkin out my latest peice coz it hasnt been looked at much and ima rep tyou wen i can
    OH HAI!

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    • #3
      It was okay. Too fast paced. But not bad.
      no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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      • #4
        uppin..
        Originally posted by Realize
        evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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        • #5
          pretty good, but the overall message was a bit unclear
          .

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          • #6
            that was amazing when i can rep u again i will.
            tay

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            • #7
              Great capture,nice form "Id read that twice"
              I HAVE ALL THE ROCK I CAN HANDLE

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