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  • I Wish I Could Be A Kid Again.

    I dabbed dirty water over my face
    the cloth soaked in it, left damp
    So I let it slip from my hands
    a serene moment, slight solace.

    I wrapped myself in a light blanket
    laying down, shivering on the cement.
    my finger nails dirty, my beard long
    for years, the same shirt and pants.

    I coughed and cleared my throat
    as I sneezed, and cleared my mind.
    I never thought I'd be here, now.
    I wish I could be a kid again.

    (I've left feed @ http://www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=245518 and @ http://www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=244307)

  • #2
    This poem doesn't suck. I liked it alot. Only. I kinda hope this one isn't about me... lol...

    Good job, Harry. You should write more poetry.
    no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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    • #3
      Thanks Kali.

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      • #4
        haha nice... i gotta give you alot of originality points, i've never read anything like this

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