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    Time 2 Think

    [Verse 1]
    Frozen innocence in her eyes of luminous sands
    I watched her skin reflect the light that bled through her strands
    As she made her way off the plane, want to cry, but I resist tears
    If it wasnít for ever meeting her, I wouldnít ever exist here
    She runs over, hugs me, I stroll my hand through her brunette roots
    feeling her cold arms around my neck, and I never wanted to had left you
    but everything went fuzzy, and I woke up in the middle of the night, heart imploding
    Its dark and Iím cold and the windows are open
    Go to shut them back down, they wont budge because the frames broken
    Could of swore I saw a after image of my baby floating
    outside my bedroom window, Iím delusional and light headed
    go back to lying down, thinking of your eyes looking like diamonds embedded
    since I have some time to think


    [Chorus] [repeat x2]
    every day is valuable, we may have conflicts and scream
    but you always know how to make me smile and give me self-esteem
    stress covers me a lot, I try to shake it
    I owe you a lot now that Iíve have some time to start thinking


    [Verse 2]
    I wake in the morning, my brain doesnít swing into function
    when I rise from my bed, and I can hear the springs crunching
    reach over to the caller ID, thumbing the erase key
    your number donít show up, you probably hate me
    yell at you for trying to make me bloom a smile, Iím so ashamed
    I lie under my sheets hoping you dial my number, so I can apologize for my ways
    Reach on the table for your envelope so I can glimpse your hand-writing
    my eyes are wet, and no time soon planned to be drying
    by now my tearís moisture has trickled down the paper
    My cheeks are flushed by the cold mist you can see in my crystal vapor
    I dread the frost, but without you, life instead costs
    a simple nothing, go and sigh with a steady exhaust
    Taking all my thoughts in at once, while I have some time to think


    [Chorus] [repeat x2]

    [Verse 3]
    I miss you a lot, its sad hearing the details alone
    starting to get chapped lips because my tears are turning into hail stones
    I donít realize Iím getting sick, still anticipating the moment the phone rings
    try to pull the covers over my body, but my hands donít cling
    my arms have departed and depleted all intensions of lifting
    I live for you, you can hear my heart talking to itself about you if you listen
    I miss you rubbing up my chest, I can smell your aroma
    With a last tear, I slowly start to dwell into a coma
    And I step into a endless sleep, the phones getting a call
    All you can hear all the echoes slipping off the walls
    and you leave a message, saying you forgive me, and still want to be engaged
    and you still love me, but Iím not awake to hear it


    Dedicated to Amanda S. Horton
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

  • #2
    good work i guess
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    • #3
      Oh my God
      I absolutely love this
      The emotion is so high and you can totally feel it.
      The ending, the last verse is my favorite part of this.
      I couldve cried. Its just...that good..

      in my opinion..

      keep up the good work
      Life isn't worth living if you don't have something you'd die for.


      Never attempt to change who you are to become someone you're not.

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      • #4
        thanx, i wish more people would leave feedback

        uppin.
        Originally posted by Realize
        evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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        • #5
          uppin.. please, someone leave feedback
          Originally posted by Realize
          evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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          • #6
            Very very nice....good be better...keep it up......

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