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    Never Good Enough

    I知 never good enough for you, no matter how often I change.
    I知 crying over my kitchen sink, having tears run off in a drain.
    Try being always less of what your love suspects.
    I stare through tears at your chain that tugs my neck;
    Wondering what is me changing going to revolutionize?
    Even if it fix痴 current things, at some point evolution dies.
    Going back to same situations, trying to repair damage just increases complications.
    100% in to see our relationship fall to pieces leaves frustrations.
    I知 upset because of what we together constructed
    burned down in a bit of rage and is forever dusting
    by remaining breezes that still keeps a little bit in tact
    Me loving you is still the mist of the little bit of cracks
    of my heart, I知 sorry I知 not good enough

    Im not sure if it's done, there might be some things i'll wanna change, but tell me what ya think
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

  • #2
    You still have an awkward way of wording things.... But, it was ok.

    "Going back to same situations, trying to repair damage just increases complications."

    I can agree with that one statement alot though.
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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    • #3
      that's an OK one
      work on it
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      • #4
        I agree with what Psycho said. It was okay. But awkward to read.
        no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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        • #5
          whoa, u need to think a lot about this..!
          "I知 upset because of what we together constructed
          burned down in a bit of rage and is forever dusting
          by remaining breezes that still keeps a little bit in tact
          Me loving you is still the mist of the little bit of cracks
          of my heart, I知 sorry I知 not good enough"
          This is the BEST part of it all!
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          • #6
            psycho, i appreciate ur feedback, but how come u only reply back when theres something YOU DIDNT like? anyways, repped everyone
            Originally posted by Realize
            evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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            • #7
              I quoted a line I liked, and made a statement about how your writing. I wasn't saying anything bad or dissin it. I was being honest.. and I just respond to whatever I respond to. I don't just reply to something to say somsthing negative.

              If I really was planning on that.. I'd just reply to your thread or anyone elses and say "It's shit" and leave it at that...
              Now let the night be dark for all of me.
              Let the night be too dark for me to see
              Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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              • #8
                i know, but ive wrote other things and sometimes it seems like u only reply to say something bad about it
                Originally posted by Realize
                evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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