Until I Breathe Again

[Mystery]

Until I breathe again
Let me sleep in your arms
Until I breathe again
Hold me close as if I was never gone
Until I breathe again
Put your hands to my palms
Until I breathe again
Let my body come to no harm

Until I breathe again
I'll dream of your body next to mine
Until I breathe again
I'll keep you always in my mind
Until I breathe again
Our souls will connect outside of time
Until I breathe again
I'll never be hard to find

When I breathe again
Let your eyes connect with mine
When I breathe again
Let me see your lovely smile
When I breathe again
Let your lips linger on mine
When I breathe again
Let me lay in your arms for a while

If I never breathe again
Don’t let your last gasp be because of mine
If I never breathe again
Don’t be in a rush to speed up time
If I never breathe again
Don’t shed a tear; it'll hurt to see you cry
If I never breathe again
Don’t let your heart break because I died

[Rosana]

now that's dope. I'm really feeling it Myz, keep it up.

[Delinquent Faith]

Damn, that was a dope poem Myz. It was eloquent and beautiful, yet very sad at the same time. Nice work.

[Kali]

I liked it a lot. The flow was pretty good. The last stanza was really really good in my opinion.. I really loved it. I just thought it kinda started slow.. maybe because of the repetition.

[Mystery]

Thanks u guys appeciate the comments

[RevolutioN]

always making good poetry mysterina

[dead|ine]

i dont really enjoy alot of repetition used but this was an exceptional piece of poetry and i like it alot. good one Mystery

[Mystery]

ty u2 much appreciated

[BGZie]

aw...hella good. i like.

[Mystery]

^ thx bro