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    Until I breathe again
    Let me sleep in your arms
    Until I breathe again
    Hold me close as if I was never gone
    Until I breathe again
    Put your hands to my palms
    Until I breathe again
    Let my body come to no harm

    Until I breathe again
    I'll dream of your body next to mine
    Until I breathe again
    I'll keep you always in my mind
    Until I breathe again
    Our souls will connect outside of time
    Until I breathe again
    I'll never be hard to find

    When I breathe again
    Let your eyes connect with mine
    When I breathe again
    Let me see your lovely smile
    When I breathe again
    Let your lips linger on mine
    When I breathe again
    Let me lay in your arms for a while

    If I never breathe again
    Donít let your last gasp be because of mine
    If I never breathe again
    Donít be in a rush to speed up time
    If I never breathe again
    Donít shed a tear; it'll hurt to see you cry
    If I never breathe again
    Donít let your heart break because I died
    Mystery
    Another Fallen Soldier
    ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

  • #2
    now that's dope. I'm really feeling it Myz, keep it up.
    aReGee

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    • #3
      Damn, that was a dope poem Myz. It was eloquent and beautiful, yet very sad at the same time. Nice work.

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      • #4
        I liked it a lot. The flow was pretty good. The last stanza was really really good in my opinion.. I really loved it. I just thought it kinda started slow.. maybe because of the repetition.
        no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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        • #5
          Thanks u guys appeciate the comments
          Mystery
          Another Fallen Soldier
          ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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          • #6
            always making good poetry mysterina
            FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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            • #7
              i dont really enjoy alot of repetition used but this was an exceptional piece of poetry and i like it alot. good one Mystery
              R.I.P Proof
              ......
              get higher, get higher i never retire
              there is only two states to be in.. NSW & Stoned

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              • #8
                ty u2 much appreciated
                Mystery
                Another Fallen Soldier
                ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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                • #9
                  aw...hella good. i like.

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                  • #10
                    ^ thx bro
                    Mystery
                    Another Fallen Soldier
                    ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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