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  • Mystery
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    ^ thx bro

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  • BGZie
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    aw...hella good. i like.

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  • Mystery
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    ty u2 much appreciated

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  • dead|ine
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    i dont really enjoy alot of repetition used but this was an exceptional piece of poetry and i like it alot. good one Mystery

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  • RevolutioN
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    always making good poetry mysterina

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  • Mystery
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    Thanks u guys appeciate the comments

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  • Kali
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    I liked it a lot. The flow was pretty good. The last stanza was really really good in my opinion.. I really loved it. I just thought it kinda started slow.. maybe because of the repetition.

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  • Delinquent Faith
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    Damn, that was a dope poem Myz. It was eloquent and beautiful, yet very sad at the same time. Nice work.

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  • Rosana
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    now that's dope. I'm really feeling it Myz, keep it up.

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  • Mystery
    started a topic Until I Breathe Again

    Until I Breathe Again

    Until I breathe again
    Let me sleep in your arms
    Until I breathe again
    Hold me close as if I was never gone
    Until I breathe again
    Put your hands to my palms
    Until I breathe again
    Let my body come to no harm

    Until I breathe again
    I'll dream of your body next to mine
    Until I breathe again
    I'll keep you always in my mind
    Until I breathe again
    Our souls will connect outside of time
    Until I breathe again
    I'll never be hard to find

    When I breathe again
    Let your eyes connect with mine
    When I breathe again
    Let me see your lovely smile
    When I breathe again
    Let your lips linger on mine
    When I breathe again
    Let me lay in your arms for a while

    If I never breathe again
    Donít let your last gasp be because of mine
    If I never breathe again
    Donít be in a rush to speed up time
    If I never breathe again
    Donít shed a tear; it'll hurt to see you cry
    If I never breathe again
    Donít let your heart break because I died

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