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    I awake from dreams
    of your car finding it’s way to my driveway
    I hear engine roar in the distance.
    Running to my window I sit
    watching in silence as
    cars quickly pass by.

    Falling asleep at my window-pain
    wanders from my eyes.
    Still I await for your return.

    16 years passed
    like headlights riding into the sun set–
    ing me up for disappointment
    at each stop sign.

    I stay far away from
    ......Life.........

    until promises you sprained
    heal...taping the
    leak of trust from your broken words.

    I daze,
    :::::remembering::::
    ...Your promise to return...
    ...Yet you never came back...

    I Lie in misery
    blocking lights of emotions.
    clouds seem to follow me.
    Shadowing the love that
    lived around me.

    I stay away from the world.
    Isolating myself from heartaches,
    pain
    -n-
    love

    Late nights I awake..
    Waiting for you return
    because you promised..
    You’d be back...


    rocking back
    and fourth..holding the teddy
    that say ::daddys lil girl::
    I once was....her
    .
    .
    .

    she borrowed my shoes
    and noticed, how wore down my;
    soul has really got

  • #2
    Great poem. I loved it. Especially the ending.
    no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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    • #3
      that was pretty....the endin was surprizin too. good job.

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      • #4
        great poem, great style
        R M Nixon


        Turkish Talk, Music & More

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        • #5
          great poem, good ending as well, was a surprise as said.
          ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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          • #6
            Wow, that was incredible Tay. I loved the surprise ending. Absolutely fantastic work here. Good stuff.

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