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    You came into my life and took me by surprise
    Now I feel like I hit the lottery, the ultimate prize
    You came into my life and everything became so clear
    Now there is nothing to hide from, nothing to fear
    You came into my life and I no longer have to frown
    Now nothing in the whole world can ever bring me down
    You came into my life and showed me what love really is
    Now I can’t live without your hugs or just a little kiss
    You came into my life and I found a partner forever
    Now I thank got everyday for pairing us together
    You came into my life and it no longer was a living hell
    Now it’s this beautiful life that can only be read in fairytales
    The day you came into my life it changed for the best
    That’s why I love you with all my heart from the depths of my chest

  • #2
    aww Bless Thas Sweet.
    I'm the Mujahideen and I'm making a scene! now your gonna feel what the boom boom mean like tupac said when i die i aint dead we are the matyr's you are squashed tomatoes

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    • #3
      That's sort of cheesy, but sweet.. But, I can't hate, I've written poems like that.

      Not bad.
      Now let the night be dark for all of me.
      Let the night be too dark for me to see
      Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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      • #4
        nice
        short and sweet

        if i were you i would just separate the last two lines from the rest of the poem. have it as a closing statement. i would say it's like a sonnet, but it doesn't have enough syllable's per line to be one.
        ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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        • #5
          cute reminds me of a pop song

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