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    You're everything I never wanted
    The one person that could ruin my life in a second
    Why did I have to let you in,
    I shouldve locked the door and thrown away the key.
    Forever keeping you from destorying my sanity once again.

    Every second that I ever knew you,
    Is one second too long gone from my life.
    You killed a part of me,
    darkened my heart, blackened my soul
    Something that I can never regain back,
    All because of the "friendship" you gave me.

    Thank you for lettinng me realize,
    how just being in the same proximity as you,
    kills me piece by piece, inch by inch, .

    You are a disease of the worst kind;
    leeching of the emotios,
    devouring the soul of any innocent.

    There are no words to describe you or the amount of pain you cause,
    Forever will you be locked away,
    never letting you destroy the innocence and purity of me or anyone else ever again.
    Life isn't worth living if you don't have something you'd die for.


    Never attempt to change who you are to become someone you're not.

  • #2
    wow that guy must have been a real fuck up! if this poem is life related im sry u had to go through that pain but that was real deep and i enjoyed reading it cuz i can feel the pain u know? keep it up
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    • #3
      ha. thnx.

      Its more a compilation of guys. Not just one in particular.

      But thnx.
      Life isn't worth living if you don't have something you'd die for.


      Never attempt to change who you are to become someone you're not.

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      • #4
        That was pretty deep. The words really struck home the sheer amount of emotion you've felt for this guy(s) and it was nicely done, very to the point.

        Good work.

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        • #5
          Thnx. Just something that came to me today and guess it was time to finally just let it out.
          Life isn't worth living if you don't have something you'd die for.


          Never attempt to change who you are to become someone you're not.

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          • #6
            Oh, this is awesome! Men suck dude! I loved it! Why do they have to be such pansy fucktards? Psh... I hope you find a good one eventually.
            no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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            • #7
              Ha. I hope you find a good one too.

              Glad you liked it.
              Life isn't worth living if you don't have something you'd die for.


              Never attempt to change who you are to become someone you're not.

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              • #8
                The south ain't lyrical? Naw it aint that,
                sumtimez you just don't understand wtf we sayin

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                • #9
                  I'm sorry you had to go through all that pain.

                  Even though I remember readin' a similar poem by you a while ago, I still think this is tight. I don't blame ya 'cuz you just gotta express those emotions again. I'm still feelin' what you got. I agree with Harry on the way you depicted the sheer amount of emotion you felt for those motherfuckers.

                  Good luck with everything.

                  Peace.
                  P!

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                  • #10
                    Thank you very much.

                    Just one thing, it seems like you have to experience all this pain to find what or who truly makes you happy.
                    Life isn't worth living if you don't have something you'd die for.


                    Never attempt to change who you are to become someone you're not.

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                    • #11
                      yes this is deep and can kind of tell it is a recent experience, regret is well communicated.

                      some parts like this one, remind me of "friends" I've had and lost, and ppl I still come across.....

                      You are a disease of the worst kind;
                      leeching of the emotios,
                      devouring the soul of any innocent.

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                      • #12
                        damn, this oem is a great example of the emotion that can be put into poetry. weather it be hate, happiness, rage, or fear. if used in the right way all forms of emotion is great to feel once and a while.. anyways this was great, not the fact that you had to go through the pain that lead you to write this but, think of it this way. without emotions you couldnt have wrote this.. so yeahhh good job buddy lol

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