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    Hey... do you remember the time you warned me
    not to go on that part of the ice mountain?
    'course I didnt listen, and I slipped, fell and was bleeding everywhere
    and you dragged me into your appartment, an your mom straight freaked out!

    (goodbye)
    haha, do you remember?
    (goodbye)

    Do you remember... when we'd race our bikes in the parking lot?
    It was winter, slippery as fuck and I crashed into a snow pile
    I got buried in it from the impact, an you guys just laughed
    Winter was so bitter and cold, yet we always smiled...

    (goodbye)
    haha, do you remember now?
    (goodbye)

    Do you remember... The first time I smoked weed?
    You ran from me, fearing the smell would stick to your clothes
    and you've become a bigger pothead than I ever could be
    The drugs sure did make time fly by

    (goodbye)
    ahaha, hey you remember??
    (goodbye)

    when we blazed and my living room was so foggy
    I couldnt see you across the room? And you got me to order porno
    On TV, and I told my mom it was a combo of Toy Story movies?
    Cause it was named "Toy Stories", ahaha. I Still cant believe I did that

    (goodbye)
    ah... ha?
    (goodbye)

    do you remember when we were at the Canada Day fireworks
    and they went off, and that sonofabitch got stabbed?
    how much we laughed and hoped he'd die for trying to kill **** first?
    we weren't all that bad, now... were we?

    (goodbye)
    hey... you remember...
    (goodbye)

    when I was the bouncer of that house party
    and you left me for dead, and I almost got shot in the head?
    Do you remember that? Tell me, do you?
    Haha... Good times... Right? I made it out fine, right?

    (goodbye)
    remember...
    (goodbye)

    Go on now, you walk your path. I forgive you
    I understand why, I forgive you. I love you.
    I still love you, no matter what. My brother.
    But this is... goodbye.

    (goodbye)
    remember... I hope you do.
    (goodbye)

    I had to get this off my chest...

    Goodbye brother.

  • #2
    Aw.. Wow.. That's sad. But no friendship lasts forever. And even if it does, things change. I liked this poem a lot.. one of my favorites by you. a lot of emotion.. sorry for your loss, dude.
    no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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    • #3
      That was great man.. I've lost touch with my best friend, so I can somewhat understand some of the feelings in this to an extent.. I finally talked to her tonight like old times. It's amazing how much you can miss someone.

      I'm sorry for not going back on AIM in time.. I really did want to finish our chat.

      Anyways man, great job.
      Now let the night be dark for all of me.
      Let the night be too dark for me to see
      Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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      • #4
        Thanks.

        I guess you're right Aero, still 14 years of friendship is a long time.

        (For clarifcation, the stuff I wrote down was from start-around when we were reallllllly young like 4 about to now. I've still got that scar from when I fell off that snow/ice mountain, lmao)

        I just wish it didn't end like it did, know what I'm sayin?

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        • #5
          i was wondering who it was about until i actually got to a part i recognised.

          nice poem harry, full of memories. it sucks to have to write poems like this 'cause you rather you never have to end a friendship that had so many good times. but as you said, you had to get it off your chest.
          great poem
          ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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          • #6
            Very great. It was as if you were telling a story, and I've got mad respect for that, because it was so deep, and portrayed a picture painted by none other than a wound that can't heal.

            Very nice job.
            Love, live life, proceed, progress

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            • #7
              i can relate partially
              nice poem
              nice storytelling

              is this closure 4 you?
              i can relate 4 that need of closure too...
              Mystery
              Another Fallen Soldier
              ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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              • #8
                I don't know if it's closure.

                I've got a lot of shit I can now let go of off my chest with my probation over, and I do hope it brings me closure.

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                • #9
                  yeah i agree with Sneaky. Its weird when a whole bunch of memories build up and create "realisation". real niiice concept with expressing yourself.

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