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    God had made a deal with the Devil.
    The Devil argued, “I may offer one human all his hearts desire
    And he shall fall, damning every soul into my grasp.”

    The Lord doubted not the integrity of one man.

    And so, the Lord hath said. “Go forth, and tempt once more
    May Judgment come this eve, if you do succeed.”
    The Devil’s grin spread a mile wide, as he returned
    To the plane of men.

    The Devil could chose, any human he saw fit.
    Of course, he chose me. I sold drugs to kids, killed for money
    I thought of no one but myself, my entire life…
    “I’ve got a proposition for you’, human.” He grinned.

    “I’ll give you all the riches in the world.
    The most beautiful women will appear before you,
    and satisfy your every sinful desire.
    You can rule the Earth, as King!”
    He spoke, his eyes shining with fire

    “Your ‘God’, has given you power over your peers,
    grant me their souls, and immortality be yours.
    Or, if a fool ye be, sacrifice your own soul
    And delay the inevitable fall of man once more.”


    I looked around the crowd, as this man stared through me.
    It was as if time itself had come to a standstill,
    This one incredible choice burdening my shoulders.
    I had time to reflect on my life.

    I once dreamt of ruling the world.
    Movies and music tainted the soul of my impressionable youth
    With grandeurs of power, money and women.
    Now, it was a mere choice away.

    “Well? What say you, human?” snickering with disgust
    every moment he had to be in my, no, our presence
    he seemed to loathe. “I make the rules here. You’ve got ten seconds
    or I chose for you.”


    Sweat trickled down my brow.
    I spun myself around, around, around.
    I gazed at all the faces in the crowd.
    I never took the time to stop and see each individual for themselves…

    He stood there, a menacing look in his eyes.
    He held up one hand, as it counted down…
    5…4…3…2…
    “Wait! I’ve made my decision!”
    “Well human, what say you?”

    I put forth my wrists, figuring it was similar to being arrested.
    His eyes widened a look of instant shock. “But, you could have had it all!
    The riches! The sexual slavery of the most beautiful women!
    You would own the entire Earth!”



    “No amount of sexual pleasure could please me if I never knew love.
    All the riches in the world would be useless, if I’ve no where to spend.
    All the animals in their Kingdom would never compare, to a true friend.
    And most of all, I never sign shit without reading the fine print.”

    Ever been asked if you'd do *insert idiocy here* or let every other person alive die?

    Yeah.

  • #2
    lol i started laughing at the last line, was amusing to me. nice concept, good flow. specially the last stanza lol, i liked the way it ended. amusing to me lol...basically telling the devil to go fuck himself lmao...sorry im in a strange mood lol

    nice work harry
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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    • #3
      master harry you be makin me laugh with all these gangstafied poetry lines keep em comin because they tight as hell like the last line lmao(I)
      FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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      • #4
        Ha, that was great.

        I loved the way you ended it also.

        This whole pieces worked out really well. !
        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
        Let the night be too dark for me to see
        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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        • #5
          yea that was funny n thoughtfull.

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          • #6
            Did no one see the underlying message of this poem?! (chickensm

            lmao. Glad ya'll enjoyed it. Thanks.

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