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  • Midnight Sun

    havent written in a while, been busy on some other projects. anyway, trying to get back into it

    Midnight Sun

    im dying to know
    do you like these long nights
    and empty days
    do you think we'll make it home ok?
    if we go a different way
    on a road thats nowhere fast
    where dreams die hard
    but we still last
    yeah, we dont even care
    as hopeless as we are
    headlights dimming in the dawn
    a midnight sun thats never gone
    do you like long car rides
    in the pouring rain
    and sleeping in the parking lot
    we fall in love with what we've got
    now im tied up in the knots
    that you create
    truthfully, ive never felt so safe
    i guess i can count my friends
    but i can never count on them
    the way i love to count on you
    like shadows in the afternoon
    and we fall asleep inside your room
    like headlights dimming in the dawn
    .

  • #2
    That was a good piece man, nice flow. I enjoyed it a lot.

    truthfully, ive never felt so safe
    i guess i can count my friends
    but i can never count on them
    the way i love to count on you
    That part really stood out to me, real nice stuff man.

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    • #3
      nice to see a new poem from you.
      nice flow, liked the short lines

      good work
      ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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      • #4
        I loved it. Great work.
        no dough ho, you can't fuck with me!

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        • #5
          thanks
          .

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          • #6
            Really good stuff man.

            Harry quoted my favourite part.

            Now let the night be dark for all of me.
            Let the night be too dark for me to see
            Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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            • #7
              hhhhmmm interesting, well written but the following lines won me over.......HHHHOT stuff>>>

              do you like long car rides
              in the pouring rain
              and sleeping in the parking lot
              we fall in love with what we've got
              now im tied up in the knots
              that you create

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