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    Last edited by Psycho69; 06-21-2006, 07:33 AM.
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

  • #2
    well congratulations you have officially brought on my water works...damn...

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    • #3
      Damn Thats Deep!!!!

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      • #4
        Thank you very much.

        One of the more recent pieces, that was on the spot, and meant ALOT to me... I'd hoped returning to this style, would please a few others also, since it seems there are numerous times I've been reminded about this style.

        Glad you both liked it
        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
        Let the night be too dark for me to see
        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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        • #5
          that is absolutely beautiful Mike. You know, you are lucky to have a love like this, many people would envy you. And by reading this, it brings back many memories for me, and in some way through your words I can feel that unique feeling of love that i once had. it's amazing that you can write and affect people this way Mike. You really do have a wonderful way with words, and despite how much you may not believe what i say, i truly do love your poetry.



          P.S.
          I want a book still

          ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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          • #6
            Thanks alot Gemma

            Yeah, yeah.. one of these days a book will have to be made. lol.

            Once I get a job, and more money, the second I pay off my debts, that'll be my next goal to accomplish and by then will have alot more material to sort through and add
            Now let the night be dark for all of me.
            Let the night be too dark for me to see
            Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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            • #7
              Like i already said you have talent.

              Beautifully written' keep shining

              ..Respect
              .
              .
              .

              she borrowed my shoes
              and noticed, how wore down my;
              soul has really got

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              • #8
                Wow man. Gemma said "some people would envy you", well I fucking do. But it's incredible that in a world like this, in the state our world is in there can still be true unrelenting love. Keep that, love is the most precious feeling in the world.. or so I hear.

                Incredible poem.

                Psst, it's on.

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                • #9
                  wow! just like your other work, i LUV it.

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                  • #10
                    Thank you all.

                    I really appreciate it.

                    This is one of a handful of pieces I believe mean a LOT to me.

                    And knowing it can atleast touch people, whether it be in some small, subtle ways, gives one reason to believe that they have something worthy of sharing with the world.
                    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                    Let the night be too dark for me to see
                    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                    • #11
                      damn, thats just awsome, left me speechless, both parts of this piece are just incredible, thanx for such a heartfelt read

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                      • #12
                        Thank you!
                        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                        Let the night be too dark for me to see
                        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                        • #13
                          very inspirational, and i appreciate the reminder that love is a beautiful thing. sometimes it's hard to remember what this feels like when things are rough, but your poem restored a bit of my optimism and that was a true gift. thank you!

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                          • #14
                            Very nice. It's nice to see you're emotionally happy!
                            twitter.com/thisistc

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                            • #15
                              Do you have the first part I'd love to read the first part
                              "AND NO MATTER WHAT THEY DO, THERE WILL NEVER BE ANOTHER YOU."
                              R.I.P BIG PROOF YOUR MUSIC LIVES ON THROUGH US


                              REP ME=REP U POST IN THREAD

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