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    Without you to be my guide
    Without you by my side
    I would have never felt such pride
    Without the joy you bring
    Without the image of you wearing your ring
    My existence wouldn’t mean a thing
    Without the sweetness of your face
    Without the warmth of your embrace
    My whole life would be a total disgrace
    Without your words oh so sweet
    Without those little massages I give your lil feet
    My soul would feel totally incomplete
    Without the thought of you in my mind
    Without your inspiration for my rhymes
    Everything I ever do is just a waste of time
    If I were to ever be without you, I’d have a huge void
    My heart and my soul would be completely destroyed
    And I would be left with all the great memories we both enjoyed

  • #2
    Good work. The rhyme patteren was simple and easy to follow. The concept was cute also.

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    • #3
      I agree with Starie. It was a great rhyme scheme, flowed smoothly and it really great. Was this about your boyfriend/girlfriend?

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      • #4
        aaaaw yeah this is great work

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