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    they say the devils playgrounds the world
    but i don't belive them acussations claimed
    because ive seen the devil in my dreams
    i have seen and heard him ask for my help
    iv heard him shout out for my experience
    because ive seen the devil dance and he fell
    i have red the cards that he has delt
    his hand was lame,and he lost his belt
    the moon and the sun he put up for grabs
    and i took them both ran off and laughed
    the devils just a clown,master of his craft
    but his crafts worth shit,i have him on my strings
    he thinks he runs me but he runs nothing
    the devils playground is nowhere to be found
    your as good as gold,but gold is losen value
    so i guess your oil,just profit for a soul

  • #2
    each line is catchy

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    • #3
      thats cute...they say the devils playgrounds the world-yup-love that line

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      • #4
        I enjoyed that. Nice work.

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        • #5
          thnx for the feedback....uppin

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          • #6
            i disagree with a lot of the conept for your poem, but i do understand where you're coming from. bad things can happen but you shouldn't let that bother you, because things are never perfect.

            nice poem, keep writing
            Originally posted by Realize
            evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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            • #7
              thnx for ur honesty man..i appreciate that...any more feed?

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              • #8
                uppin

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