your love

[Ravila05]

The power of your love swallows me whole
The mere thought of you makes me lose all control
It makes me do things I had never done
Like waking up with a smile with the call of the morning sun
You brought happiness go a life full of misery and sorrow
Now I go about everyday without feeling hollow
The void I had always lived with has now been filled
The depression I had been cursed with has now been killed
It was worth to wait so very long
To have this life where nothing at all is wrong
Your love is to thank, for my soul has been saved
And I get to live with every single thing I have ever craved

[BGZie]

that was cute. very short and to the point. good job.

[EvilSpecialist]

the topic is exactly opposite of what i'm always writing about.. positive poems.. i need to write more of those..

anyways like BGZie said, short & point came across nicely. there's some things i would of done different, but who am i to criticize? keep writing