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    The power of your love swallows me whole
    The mere thought of you makes me lose all control
    It makes me do things I had never done
    Like waking up with a smile with the call of the morning sun
    You brought happiness go a life full of misery and sorrow
    Now I go about everyday without feeling hollow
    The void I had always lived with has now been filled
    The depression I had been cursed with has now been killed
    It was worth to wait so very long
    To have this life where nothing at all is wrong
    Your love is to thank, for my soul has been saved
    And I get to live with every single thing I have ever craved

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    that was cute. very short and to the point. good job.

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      the topic is exactly opposite of what i'm always writing about.. positive poems.. i need to write more of those..

      anyways like BGZie said, short & point came across nicely. there's some things i would of done different, but who am i to criticize? keep writing
      Originally posted by Realize
      evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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