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    The Grave

    Back then before our spirits crossed paths
    depression was faith's choice of mood.
    Your eyes expressed you loved me
    and I probably felt an even greater magnitude.
    I appreciated waking up;
    Before you I contemplated my death before I'd sleep.
    So why would I pull back from my deepest desire?
    I couldn't imagine losing the 1 thing I wanted to keep.
    Everything was going perfect,
    but it's natural to experience calm before the storm.
    Your personality died and was reborn a stranger
    and for that I sit here and mourn.
    I put fourth sweat and tears
    trying to develope a method to bring back the deceased.
    Everyday I jabbed shovels in the soil trying to find you;
    Whether it be your laugh or any other piece.
    I really wanted to reclaim the tone in your voice
    when you said you missed me and I'd reminiscent.
    At the same time I was losing myself in your maze
    trying to even see a little glimpse.
    I poured out my heart into the mystery
    until one day it was dismissed.
    I ran out of heart to give and it became obvious
    you werent coming back no matter how hard I wished.
    But I didn't accept the obvious
    because I had lost 4 years plus the time spent searching.
    I eventually let go the best years of my life.
    She's somewhere in that grave of the once former person.
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

  • #2
    that was really pretty.

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    • #3
      .
      Originally posted by Realize
      evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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      • #4
        lol thats weird...uuuummm yeah good but i just cant put my mind around it.

        great metaphors...digging and searching

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        • #5
          Beautifully discripted. i liked the
          emotion that was placed here.
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          .
          .

          she borrowed my shoes
          and noticed, how wore down my;
          soul has really got

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          • #6
            oh the idea is communicated clearly EvilSpecialist, and you've done it sincerely without harshness....but the poem is harsh and i guess thats what i implied when i said its weird....hhmmm changes.....

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            • #7
              its all good
              Originally posted by Realize
              evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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              • #8
                ps.love it

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                • #9
                  Good poem. The emotion and the overall topic were perfect. Keep writting.

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