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    Topic: color freewrite

    Captured shots, blinked distant colors.
    Black, drove me further and further from the pain.
    Red, seeped through the cloth, I held where you hit.
    ~)(Hard)(~

    ,,,,,,,,,,,EsCaPe

    heartache upon heartache.
    Fuck em’ because
    Blue, resided on my arms you
    held so tight. To tight
    Yet. I never wanted you to let go.
    Purple, placed over distorted colors of love.

    Love, sang beautiful melodies to me,
    songs of tears, dropping upon paper
    silent sighs break through thoughts.

    .I hate you. I wish you’d just goo. I love you.

    colors, describe us.
    A interracial relationship
    yet you left me more Colorful then before.

    How can I escape
    the painful memories. lost in translation.
    Let me speak, to bad you’ll never understand.
    You talk louder, grabbing me tighter.
    Screaming let me see your true colors.
    Last edited by Tay-Tay; 04-21-2006, 01:49 PM.
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    she borrowed my shoes
    and noticed, how wore down my;
    soul has really got

  • #2
    before i start talking about what a wonderful poem this is, you mispelled 'go' where it says 'goo'.

    anyways i really like the part

    colors, describe us.
    A interracial relationship
    yet you left me more Colorful then before.

    very good lines. i love how you used colors to describe ones feelings. good work
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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    • #3
      lol. i know how to spell go, but i put it how the reader
      is suppose to read it. Like a longer feeling, not just go.
      Thanx for checkin this out.
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      she borrowed my shoes
      and noticed, how wore down my;
      soul has really got

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      • #4
        wasnt sure if it was a typo or not, my bad
        Originally posted by Realize
        evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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        • #5
          I liked it. The colored words and different symbols you used really made it awesome.

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